Reviews of Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
Felix9713
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Awesome story! Cool and badass protagonist who is calm and collected. Its hard to find intelligent MC but the author is good at portraying them in his stories. I especially like how detailed the prologue is. There maybe some plotholes but it won't hamper your reading experience at all. If you're a casual reader like me who doesn't want perfection but just enjoyment while reading fanfic, then you'll like this story. I'm only at chapter 17 while writing this review and it's been damn good to read! The fight scenes are awesome. I can totally see author's passion while writing battle scenes. And most importantly the character development so far is good. The interaction between the MC and other characters are good and on point. The dialogue doesn't feel like a NPC script or whatever you call it. And the grammar of this story is good even though the author tells us that he's not a native speaker. Anyway I recommend you to give it a try. This story is a lot better than the heap of garbages that you call a fanfic in this site!
Your other Fanfic for Classroom of the Elite is amazing, And now with this new story I can now confirm that you are a really good author. Please always be able to update and write out chapters! For my thoughts on this new story are: Solid details, Proper Sentences, Fluid word choice(If I can count this) And of course Spelling! which of course is a strong point in both of your stories~ Please keep writing out the chapters!
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3.2 here. It's okay i guess, but i'm gonna stop here i think. The whole romance **** is taking too much place in the story. I came for akame ga kill, aka ruthless, and in those last chapter it's just all the time about chicks. It's corrupting the whole atmosphere of the story, i feel like i'm now in a slice of life with a too op mc and harem candidates. I can already tell how this **** will end and i won't lose more time with all of this. Too much romance kill the romance.
I nearly never review but I couldn't stop myself from reviewing this, despite being in its earliest chapters, a very long prolouge (9 chapters) that is really interesting, not the now too much repeated bored otaku or hero of the day, we got a bored person becoming an (spoilerπ) with a whole story, character development included, a really wonderful start. I don't give a 5 on world backgroud just because we are still in the prolouge. (just read it, it's worth the time)
Long ass chps..OP genius MC ....so far cant judge but quite interesting......a lazy kinda apathetic MC in an assassination org question; is the MC going to be an SI in the FF with all the knowledge cause would be nice..MC could be the emperors bro...and what does the dark tag mean?...I really dont want to read so dark FF filled with rape..gore ...and ****... Suggestion; IDK....OP MC,,,,,smart and lone one man army style.....just no perverted idiot.....maybe give MC some unique IM...like a fire one similar to ryjin jakka?....or one with sound powers?...maybe SUGARS ability from one piece but instead of toys its puppets?..from animals to humans?................add some romance and fluff just build it...dont make MC a man-whore or his lovers whores,,,,,no NTR..........
This fiction is not Dark at all. It is dull π and is filled with too much of sweetness, polite words and behavior of all characters. Some things makes no sense in this fiction, like Assassins calling themselves as Family like Mafia even when the main character doesn't care much about his own mother going as far as to erase her memories. There is some hypocrisy here. They justify them of killing others (targets) saying that targets are not good people for society π
Everyone who has watched Akame ga kill must read this. Even if you have not watched it still you must read this. This story have everything that should be required for a perfect fanfic. It have great story before reincarnation. It have great story after reincarnation. System is well thought without any messy skills or jobs. Character development is great. Basically everything is perfect and have more perfection than we can ask. WHY ARE YOU WASTING YOUR TIME READING THIS LENGTHY REVIEW GO AND READ THE STORY..
The novel overall is very good but story focuses way too much on girls and their weird antics that it gets annoying.The most glaring issue I feel ion the story is that mc's first love interest "Taeko" is nothing special and is very mediocre commpared to other options and author focuses way too much on her without introducing any special trait for her.It would have been better if author focused on esdeath only.
The MCbgot nerfed really hard. In the OC world he was supposed to be a genius where everything bores him. He was a perfect assassin who never made mistakes. But now in the akame world he does stupid things like talk before fighting, goes easy on opponents seeing that they are weaker than and plays with him, can't use his brain enough to get what he wants and he talks too sweet for my liking. His intelligence is nerfed. He forgot the most important things that his wife in the OC world taught him.
After suffering through the bad grammar and understanding, I have decided to abandon this fic at chapter 83. The amount of information placed into this fic is inconsistent and it lacks a concept, therefore I have decided to abandon it. However, this tale has an incredible opening, as well as a world-building that's also imaginative, powerful, and passionate. One of the finest I've ever read. In my experience, if your character is significant enough to have a name, they are also significant enough to have a purpose. As far as I can tell from what I've read so far, Akashi's character development is purely for narrative purposes; Akashi has a basic goal, which is to live an easy and pleasant existence. The way you conclude your tale will be remembered by readers for the longest time. I have a lot of thoughts, but for the time being, this is all I have to conclude.
