Awesome story! Cool and badass protagonist who is calm and collected. Its hard to find intelligent MC but the author is good at portraying them in his stories. I especially like how detailed the prologue is. There maybe some plotholes but it won't hamper your reading experience at all. If you're a casual reader like me who doesn't want perfection but just enjoyment while reading fanfic, then you'll like this story. I'm only at chapter 17 while writing this review and it's been damn good to read! The fight scenes are awesome. I can totally see author's passion while writing battle scenes. And most importantly the character development so far is good. The interaction between the MC and other characters are good and on point. The dialogue doesn't feel like a NPC script or whatever you call it. And the grammar of this story is good even though the author tells us that he's not a native speaker. Anyway I recommend you to give it a try. This story is a lot better than the heap of garbages that you call a fanfic in this site!
Felix9713
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LIKEThank you for your review but I must disagree with your opinion on fighting scenes. xD I think that I have a really small vocabulary to describe it very well which really irritates me. But I agree with the "passion" thing, unfortunately it's too hard. xD Well, at least I try my best which I think is what truly counts.
Well it's good enough for me. I also have a limited vocabulary lol. It will make it difficult for me if you used some unseen words.
Felix9713:Thank you for your review but I must disagree with your opinion on fighting scenes. xD I think that I have a really small vocabulary to describe it very well which really irritates me. But I agree with the "passion" thing, unfortunately it's too hard. xD Well, at least I try my best which I think is what truly counts.
Felix9713:Thank you for your review but I must disagree with your opinion on fighting scenes. xD I think that I have a really small vocabulary to describe it very well which really irritates me. But I agree with the "passion" thing, unfortunately it's too hard. xD Well, at least I try my best which I think is what truly counts.
Felix9713:Thank you for your review but I must disagree with your opinion on fighting scenes. xD I think that I have a really small vocabulary to describe it very well which really irritates me. But I agree with the "passion" thing, unfortunately it's too hard. xD Well, at least I try my best which I think is what truly counts.