Long ass chps..OP genius MC ....so far cant judge but quite interesting......a lazy kinda apathetic MC in an assassination org question; is the MC going to be an SI in the FF with all the knowledge cause would be nice..MC could be the emperors bro...and what does the dark tag mean?...I really dont want to read so dark FF filled with rape..gore ...and ****... Suggestion; IDK....OP MC,,,,,smart and lone one man army style.....just no perverted idiot.....maybe give MC some unique IM...like a fire one similar to ryjin jakka?....or one with sound powers?...maybe SUGARS ability from one piece but instead of toys its puppets?..from animals to humans?................add some romance and fluff just build it...dont make MC a man-whore or his lovers whores,,,,,no NTR..........
Felix9713
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LIKEThanks for the review and I just now realized that I didn't explain anything here (I explained most of the things on my other fan-fic) I will probably add details in the auxiliary chapter, thanks for reminding me xD. As for DARK tag...well, it's Akame Ga Kill. You can expect a lot of killing but I am not sure why I even put it there. I just put there a few things that came into my mind at that time.
Felix9713:Thanks for the review and I just now realized that I didn't explain anything here (I explained most of the things on my other fan-fic) I will probably add details in the auxiliary chapter, thanks for reminding me xD. As for DARK tag...well, it's Akame Ga Kill. You can expect a lot of killing but I am not sure why I even put it there. I just put there a few things that came into my mind at that time.
Felix9713:Thanks for the review and I just now realized that I didn't explain anything here (I explained most of the things on my other fan-fic) I will probably add details in the auxiliary chapter, thanks for reminding me xD. As for DARK tag...well, it's Akame Ga Kill. You can expect a lot of killing but I am not sure why I even put it there. I just put there a few things that came into my mind at that time.