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HaughtyYoungMaster

HaughtyYoungMaster

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Sometimes I just want to disappear and see if anyone would miss me. I work as a proofreader! If your character is important enough to have a name, they’re important enough to have a goal.

2020-11-02 JoinedSouth Africa
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster1yr
    Commented

    Excuse me, what?

    And, right now, the position I am in can be described as getting fucked.
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    Loner in Danmachi
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster1yr
    Commented

    Javascript C++ My best friend's🤲😪

    I currently work as a programmer. I found it annoying at first, but it was very lucrative and it became extremely fun after a while.
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    Ant King In MHA
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Posted

    Honestly, I had intended to read this again since the last time I did was around January 2021, and I had stopped reading it for a little while on translatinotaku; I had paused at the point when they gave him the moniker "Konoha's Asura". So I was browsing on Webnovel when I came across this Fanfiction; luckily for me, it was the same Fanfiction that I had read 10 months prior. So, after reading over the description, I discover that the Author is really attempting to 'improve' the syntax of this Godly Fiction. What should I do? I double-check everything! Confident in the fact that this is far more readable than the previous time I read it. HAHA! I'm sorry for making such a rash choice, but after a few chapters, I've come to the conclusion that here is where I'm going to draw the line and call it quits. For this, I would use the phrase "swapping out" rather than "improving." So there you have it, your 'better' misconception as to what has been improved and what has not been improved. I'm not going to give you a low grade since this is not your work and is just a "improved" version. Using The God of Soul System and Hokage: Ryo Path, I attempted to replicate what you have done, my fellow Author; but, I was unable. Believe me when I say that it is far more difficult than it seems and sounds. I'll end by wishing you the best of luck in your writing endeavours and a long and prosperous career in the Department.

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    Naruto: The GodLike Hokage + Multiverse
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented

    Maybe they'll believe it's some poisonous fruit and chuck it away.

    If anyone else in this world found it, then no one will know what actually it is. Maybe they will think that it was some toxic fruit and throw it directly.
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    Naruto: The GodLike Hokage + Multiverse
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented

    'I'm not looking to provoke someone like you.'👍

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    [COMPLETED] TBATE | SHADOW MONARCH
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Replied to ZYZ
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented

    Love is merely a way of murder that has become surprisingly gentler. As a result, it’s possessive desire and sexual desire. -By if you know you know💯

    My feeling for her or how strong they were didn't make sense, I knew this was going to bring me more problems than anything else I had done in my life before, but I just didn't care. The worst part was, I knew I didn't love her, I liked her, but love was such a strong word, what I was feeling was more animalistic than anything, like a sense of possession, the moment I kissed her or rather she kissed me, I just felt she was mine.
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    Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Posted

    After suffering through the bad grammar and understanding, I have decided to abandon this fic at chapter 83. The amount of information placed into this fic is inconsistent and it lacks a concept, therefore I have decided to abandon it. However, this tale has an incredible opening, as well as a world-building that's also imaginative, powerful, and passionate. One of the finest I've ever read. In my experience, if your character is significant enough to have a name, they are also significant enough to have a purpose. As far as I can tell from what I've read so far, Akashi's character development is purely for narrative purposes; Akashi has a basic goal, which is to live an easy and pleasant existence. The way you conclude your tale will be remembered by readers for the longest time. I have a lot of thoughts, but for the time being, this is all I have to conclude.

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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented
    "Your eyes, on the other hand, are extremely calming, your lime green eyes are giving off a calming aura of nature. Staring at them makes my entire mind and body calm" I smiled after hearing her words so I said what I was thinking myself while staring into her lime green eyes.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented

    "Of course I'll accompany you on your journey." A soft grin appeared on my face, and I motioned for her to take the lead.

    "Of course I will go with you." I answered with a gentle smile and gestured for her to lead.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented

    "Akashi, would you be interested in accompanying me somewhere? I'd really would like to present something to you." When Taeko asked me, she had a little timid grin on her face and her hands were clasped behind her back as she looked at me with imploring eyes.

    "Akashi, can you go with me somewhere? I want to show you something." Taeko asked me with a slightly shy smile while looking at me with pleading eyes and her hands held behind her back.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented
    "Dear?! Looks like you will have a small annoying company. Her bullets can change trajectory so be careful~!" I shouted with an amused tone and after that, I started to completely ignore Tsukushi's presence.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented
    "Yo~! I am sorry girls but I can't let you pass, my wife still has business with your friend." I said and raised my hand as greeting with a wide grin, showing off my white teeth while having closed eyes.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Replied to wolfgod223

    There is just one love match, which I will not reveal until later, but if you truly want to know, simply ask. She appears at a later point in the plot

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    God of Soul System(Improved)
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented

    HOH! HOMOSHIROI!!

    I secretly prayed to the satan and after a few moments, the stares were immediately reduced by more than half times. Let's hope we won't meet any arrogant noblewoman who will want me as her plaything.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Commented

    We agreed that it would be better if we pretended to be very close in order to avoid seeming suspicious.

    We decided that it would be best to play that we will act be quite close as if to not appear suspicious.
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    Noble Life in Akame Ga Kill
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Replied to RennierPanggabean

    Translator? Author? Not at all, I'm just trying to make the translated version better by adding better grammar, sentence structure, and other improvements. Again, I'm just doing this for fun, and if the original author and translator would want me to remove it, I'll happily delete it.

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    God of Soul System(Improved)
    Anime & Comics · HaughtyYoungMaster
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Replied to PsyLoRD

    No, this isn't a fanfic; I'm simply rewriting it to improve the syntax, punctuation, synonyms, and so on. So if you've read the story previously and want to read it again with way better quality, I'm not actually serious about this! Then stay a while.

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    God of Soul System(Improved)
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Replied to DaoistyQNGiX

    You're dropping after the first chapter, and I alter the name of the character in the second chapter, so....

    Ch 1 Monkey.D.Roja
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    God of Soul System(Improved)
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  • HaughtyYoungMaster
    HaughtyYoungMaster2yr
    Replied to Sir_Raizel_The_III

    Please accept my apologies, but his name is Roja in the original, and I have no plans to change it at this time. It's also a very straightforward name, so please accept my apologies once again.

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    God of Soul System(Improved)
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