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Supreme Primordial God

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SioMino
SioMinoLv15SioMino

Ahhhh, so is this a incest harem with the mother? Oh, I sure hope so because I’m enjoying his mother so far, lol. Even though I’m only on chapter 4. Incest is wincest!!!

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

OP MC..dope....just build it and try to make MC travel and explore and do **** instead of some wish fulfillment **** like getting women.....add some romance and fluff..but build the romance and if harem keep it small..also dont make the MC some idiotic pervert keep him cool and smart....anyway goodluck and goodshow

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

It’s kinda unrealistic. A goddess going to a **** world like naruto. I mean I like naruto but there stupid ideology to brainwash people is fucking stupid, sacrifice yourself for the village, thats bull**** why would anybody wanna sacrifice there self for the people who don’t care about you, and leave your family behind that loves.I mean look at naruto who does not even take care of his family. That’s why his son hate him. He cares more about other people than his family. And the MC looks so stupid. His probably going to be like hagoromo and his brother who gets controlled by human and betray his mother. I fucking hate hagoromo , he loves human more than his mother. His mother got betrayed twice. I mean if I was her I would destroy the world too. This is why I hate naruto world. Cause Everyone is stupid like naruto. I bet he would sacrifice his family for the village. And the system is kinda stupid, He has a mother that has all knowledge in omniverse And she can give him any skill and art of any kind. His system should be to guide him not like other systems. Game system is good.

KoroSensei14
KoroSensei14Lv14KoroSensei14

Love it so far. I like the take on having the mother travel to worlds with him as he gets stronger and understands more energies and powers so he can further unlock his bloodline plus her personality is really funny and interesting almost like Kushina herself. Are you planning on writing his adventures in other worlds as well after he’s done with Naruto like one piece, bleach, fairy tale, etc.?

Movezbatch
MovezbatchLv4Movezbatch

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Jelly_Red_Kuma
Jelly_Red_KumaLv14Jelly_Red_Kuma

Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............! Keep it up and moar............!

TintedvCeo
TintedvCeoLv5TintedvCeo

OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls

Silent_Cuber
Silent_CuberLv3Silent_Cuber

is this dropped? it is one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever red..........................................................................................

Thumbiko_Mkhala
Thumbiko_MkhalaLv4Thumbiko_Mkhala

Not well written , if the reader has not watched naruto before then it makes no sense, unrealistic on top of that and the mc's character not well developed Apart from trying to remove the limiters has no other clear goal like how he wants to live his life u know👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

Godack
GodackLv2Godack

Writing quality: It is not perfect but you can read it clearly and understand it without much diffeculty. Updates: Good. Story Development: A guy dies and gets hit by his mother that he is the second strongest being in the multiverse. A bit faste pace in the beginning and after 10 or so chapters it transfers over into a steady pace. Character Design: A lot of characters are obviously from the anime itself, but the main character and his mother are original and have a "good" background. World Background: Original except for the elemantal nations part. So what I have noticed in this novel is that the mc is the son of the strongest being there is, so he is literally the second strongst being. He is a god, yet he decides to get an harem out of mortal woman who no doubt will be made immortal later on, this is not bad! I just want to tell this. So what I don't get is, his mother is the creator of everything yet she can't create a body for her son that is strong enough to handle his power? Like he has to go to another world just to get a better body? A bit confusing but overall a good book!

READERofBooks
READERofBooksLv13READERofBooks

Would be god but this it’s the same hiding identity thing repeated everywhere, considering how powerful him and his mother is he hides his identity in a work like naruto

BIT_Gaming
BIT_GamingLv5BIT_Gaming

Hey can you continue. I will really appreciate if you continue this volume and more specifically this story. after Naruto can you make him travel to High School DxD. I will really like to see what he will do in high School DxD. Make him go you finish with Naruto but make him go when issei is still a child and make the character extract the boosted Gear without killing him or change him from a pervert to a non pervert. And train issei in using of booster Gear and make him master everything about it. În don't give up on this story "Take It Easy" also can you make kaguya fall in love with the character. And good luck with this story/volume.

Precheur
PrecheurLv5Precheur

Bro at this point its a slice of life. MC invincible, with mother invincible in world of mortals, what sort of action do you hope for...........................................................................................................................................................................

Imabethatguy12345
Imabethatguy12345Lv3Imabethatguy12345

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Adnan_Sayed
Adnan_SayedLv1Adnan_Sayed

Every goooooooød it is awsome😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁

Gray_Beast
Gray_BeastLv14Gray_Beast

Awesome story, just the fact that the updates are few and the story can be dropped, which pls don’t it’s really awesome it’s the best Naruto fanfic out there the only one that come close to it is the one about Minato, but even the. This one is better though so pls don’t drop.

Ken_Reader
Ken_ReaderLv4Ken_Reader

Nice character design Ang keep up a good work. I like to lessen the days of the distribution of the chapter it taking so long to finish, which I anticipate for the long week MAKE MORE PLZ!!!!?

LazyGod7009
LazyGod7009Lv4LazyGod7009

u read all of it it is good I know he probably won't see this but Can you start writing again it was good And one of the only ones that I can find where me is a Primordial God And Has more then 1 Chapter

God_shiva98
God_shiva98Lv11God_shiva98

Nice story, except for the update stability, please don't drop the story. It is very rare to get such a niice fanfic so please don't drop halfway.

Lord_Stan
Lord_StanLv3Lord_Stan

I've read upto ch 64, currently the last updated chapter. the Naruto arc is over and the overlord arc just started. It's a good read and is unfortunately not updated for a long time. for now this just goes into my reading list for works in hiatus. I hope author san will update this soon.