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Godack

Godack

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2020-02-01 JoinedEuropean Union
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  • Godack
    Godack6mth
    Replied to greedsniveling
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    I Became Alien X & Trolled everyone
    Anime & Comics · Moltem
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  • Godack
    Godack6mth
    Commented

    Need to re-read this as I've forgotten everything...

    Ch 89 Chapter 87
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    Zenith: Last Revenant
    TV · Shaele
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  • Godack
    Godack8mth
    Posted

    Wonderful story, had me drawn in the whole 17 chapters that are currently released. The Idea of this story is one I haven't come across yet as but it tickles all my fancies. This review may be a bit too early but I want to write this now as to show the author that his story is something people enjoy, I've written some stories myself and I know how it feels when people are silent and don't say anything about your story. The writing quality is, as of so far, top quality. The grammar and vocabulary make the story flow fluent as is makes it so your attention isn't lost whilst reading. For the past six days 17 chapters have been uploaded, I don't know if the author stockpiled the chapters or simply writes fast with good quality but I'd say it is five star worthy. Story development is a bit of an iffy, because the story is in its early stage so I don't know how it will progress from here on out. But from what I have read so far I can say that it made sense, a bit fast paced but nothing I couldn't handle. Character design is very simple, with the theme of this story being that the Main character has lost his mind it would be evident that his design wouldn't be grandiose. There hasn't been enough time to really judge the side-characters fully by I enjoy it, though they are maybe a bit too accepting of the events that are currently happening, but that can be explained by the fact that they are living in a sort of utopia. World background is still vague but what can you expect when the story has just begun. Though it is shaping up to be something I know I will like. Conclusion, story is good and I like the concept. Definitely a read I recommend. Total rating : 4.4

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    The Laughing Swordsman
    Fantasy · Disgrace
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  • Godack
    Godack8mth
    Commented

    Wonderful

    Ch 17 Tear Down This World
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    The Laughing Swordsman
    Fantasy · Disgrace
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  • Godack
    Godack8mth
    Replied to Arkasis

    your fat sister

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    My New Life in Arifureta.
    Anime & Comics · listed
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  • Godack
    Godack11mth
    Replied to Snollygoster
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    Exploding Attribute System In Douluo Dalu
    Book&Literature · DivinDragonEmperor
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to uSeer

    He's probably a masochist too, so this wouldn't really work.

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    DC x Marvel: God Of The Omniverse
    Movies · God_Of_Brutality
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Commented
    Ch 1 Dies Irae
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    Reincarnated As Michael Demiurgos In DC/Lucifer TV
    TV · Samael_Son_of_Dawn
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to kiddeath1998

    best girl.

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    Dropped and gone
    Anime & Comics · Blur182
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Posted

    Writing Quality: 3*: The grammar is fine but because the way the story is written I have to give it 3*. Why? I will have to share how interpret how this story is written. [Main character meets an important character: main character-sanchankunkohai please call me idiot-samakunsanchanniinee] I just can't read the story normally. Updates are fine. Story development 3*. The beginning started out fine but then it just stagnated, it took multiple chapters for one day where I felt like there wasn't even much plot development besides the obvious ranting of the main character. Character design 2*. I liked the prospect of the main character but it all came crashing down when he started interacting with his surroundings. At first I though that that aunt person would be the only one but then it just became worse and worse untill I coun't read any further. World background 2*. In the couple dozen chapters I've read I haven't really learned anything significant about how the world works and what it actually is, my initial guess was that it was an original world with characters from anime etc but then apperantly it was a cliche anime world full of 2d cardboard characters that filled the world. Total score 3.0*. Now don't start saying that I am bad mouthing the story because I will admit that I am doing it but it is still a review on my opinion of the story, but this is in no way trying to discourage you from reading as you have your onw opinion and weird fetishes(though you have to have some weird and sick mind to like such fetishes[Opinion]) so don't start hating. Now my personal opinion: this story is just another generic cliche (Harem/romance/r-18) story on this cursed website that will be long forgotten after the author either drops it or finishes it.

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    I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to Dao_Li

    Love to argue with you about how that is not how things work but what did I expect...

    Ch 10 TED AND PLOT TWIST
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    DEADPOOL THROUGHOUT THE MULTIVERSE
    Anime & Comics · draculemorningstar
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to Dao_Li

    Fair enough, but that does not mean what omnipotent means, it means that you are all powerfull and that you have none stronger than you.

    Ch 10 TED AND PLOT TWIST
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    DEADPOOL THROUGHOUT THE MULTIVERSE
    Anime & Comics · draculemorningstar
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to Areize
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    DxD: Angelic Morningstar [DROPPED]
    Anime & Comics · Lucifer_D_FallN1
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Commented

    great story, though the story feels slow paced which is something new from what I usually read.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 My Odd life
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    The Ancient Wizard
    Movies · Gibby_Gibson
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to Godack

    And don't say that the mc isn't OP, he is. Maybe not to OAA standards but he is easily stronger with what powers his system shows he got.

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    Reborn as a celestial in marvel
    Anime & Comics · Jkxngxz
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Posted

    Writing quality 2* : It feels like it is written like how a chinese novel is written only with worse grammer. Stability of updates 2* : There is no stability of updates as they are randomly posted, 2* are given because the time between chapters isn't very long. (There are a dozen or so chapters that is just spam that add nothing to the story which makes the rating drop.) Stroy development 1* : It is all over the place and the bad grammer doesn't make it easier to follow, the story premise itself is okay. (The author said he didn't want his main character to be too OP but that's just bullshit as the main character is very OP, immortal/time control/creating life are just few of the main characters abilities) Character Design 1* : Due to the way the author writes it feels as if the characters are robots who are given pre-uploaded personalities. World background 3* : I gave 3* because it's marvel but nothing else particularly stood out to me that the author added himself that improved an already existing story. Total score : 1.8 My review may be harsh even though I liked reading it as everything that has something to do with marvel exites me, it's just very badly executed. I hope you improve your writing capabilities along the way. (This is in no way to discurage the author for writing.)

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    Reborn as a celestial in marvel
    Anime & Comics · Jkxngxz
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to suicide_Elf

    bit weird innit?

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    Evil Tree
    Anime & Comics · itachi1010
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to Areize

    In certain countries having a polygamy or a harem is illegal...

    Ch 1 Chapter - 01
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    Into The Marvel-verse
    Anime & Comics · Lethal_Drinker
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Replied to Areize

    Your review makes no sense.

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    Into The Marvel-verse
    Anime & Comics · Lethal_Drinker
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  • Godack
    Godack1yr
    Posted

    Writing Quality : 5/5 The flow of the story is steady so far and every chapter there is a good amount of progress without going too fast. The grammar is mostly flawless as I have only found one grammar mistake. And the quality of the writing also correlates to the quantity of writing, there is enough text in seven stories for me to read for about 20 to 25 minutes. Stability of updates : 2/5 So far there is no stability in the update schedule, I only gave 2 coins for uploading. Story Development : 4/5 The story is developing steadily through the first 7 chapters, I could easily follow the story and the background information was easy to understand and was nicely integrated into the story. Character Design : 4/5 This is where it gets tricky, I personally do not like Victor’s personality. But that doesn’t mean that the rating should be lower as my opinion in the rating shouldn’t matter. All I have to say about his character design is that it isn’t flat and I do hope to see his character develop after he spends some time in the world of fiction. World Background : 2/5 I know nothing about Monster Girl Quest and I certainly won’t want to know anything more about it outside of this fanfiction. The reason for the low rating is obvious, it is based on an already existing story which doesn’t make it original and I do not know if the author has added anything original. My overall opinion about this fanfiction is that it is good, the author has done a good job of making me interested in his story even when it is based on a story/game/ whatever it is that I don’t even know. I recommend it.

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    There is nothing I can't buy
    Anime & Comics · Touch_Fluffy_Tail
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