Reviews of A Little Pride Ain't Hurt Nobody
A Little Pride Ain't Hurt Nobody
GodofTruth
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I haven't even read the story just kind of waiting for him to update his Borderlands one so I gave almost 50 power Stones so far P.S I'm actually going to read the story but I want his Borderlands one to be updated
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very fast, very confusing, little background construction. starts with an interesting premise, but ends up losing its luster, personally I liked it better when it started full of pride, but adding a cheap novel out of nowhere, giving an idea like βviolence only generates violenceβ or even changing the life perspective of people with a few words, you should go back to africa when the Europeans arrived there and enslaved the blacks, try the same trick and the "talk no jutsu" will work yes, you can trust.
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Honestly? I'd like to ask what were you on? Marijuana? Something stronger? Cause what you wrote is just fuc!ing confusing. It's like you were having a fuc!ing seizure while writing it. I'm just... disappointed, you know? It had a good premise, Escanor without his weakness to darkness/night but just as prideful reborn in DC however you destroyed it with your writing. You go through events too fast, they are abrupt, no world building. For example in some chp he went from talking to a condescending Elven Queen to killing some dude named something Destiny in like 2 fuc!ing seconds. It's just bad, horrible I would even say.
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Mc is pretty great but I'm kinda disliking the world getting being the time of Merlin and Hogwarts founders . Him being with ravenclaw is great but I feel you should time skip that **** to the time of Harry Potter and make ravenclaw immortal and kinda fade into darkness until time of harry and reconnect with the school with ravenclaw and live through the ho story. Just my opinion , I just dislike fanfics of different timelines of the original.
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