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honestly, I don't even remember the content of it, but there is a lot of dialogue in HP, I don't know what you're talking about, dialogue with the Dursleys, dialogue with Hagrid, dialogue in Diagon Alley, dialogue on the train, dialogue in the selection and etc... from what I remember reading here, most of the dialogue was deleted in favor of a narrative summary, not that it matters to me anymore now, after all I don't remember that story.
Wow, was I the only one hoping to at least see the wedding? the story gets increasingly "better", I "love" the random jumps where all emotional development is skipped just in appeal to the development of power, that's what makes this novel have so much "life" and not seem like a diary of a stupid robot in search for constant power. It's not as if characters not linked to acquiring resources and developing power don't even have lines. What a "great" story this is, full of "vitality".
wow, very Hate, I actually saw that a lot of it talks about the word count, in my opinion it doesn't really matter if there is or not, basically you received a story for free, be grateful for what you received instead of complaining about trivia outside the plot . As for the lack of change in the story, in fact the original path has basically been traced, at least until he reaches the valley of peace, changes before that are unnecessary, after all he is Tai Lung with more memories and future knowledge, but still Tai Lung, his personality and actions are still based on the original, as is his arrogance. In general, I really like the progression of the story so far and I hope it continues.
From beginning to end I was waiting for him to revive, leave Hogwarts and develop his personal power and/or build a force or something, but after forcing myself to read the entire boring school life before he was resurrected, finally when will he escape I was left with extremely happy that the torture was over, only for a wild Dumbledore to appear and get him to be sent to Azkaban... I gave up, I don't want to be frustrated again.
As an absolute worshiper of horror, even without reading it, this story already captivated me just because of the image of the nun and its interesting synopsis. I sincerely expect a lot of chills down my spine for my future self, I confess that the mix with John Wick left me a little less interested, after all I want a horror and suspense story much more than an action and adventure one, even so, I'm still full of expectations . In the future I will come back to write a better review, but for now I will wait to release more chapters before reading.
He left out a lot of kingdom building stuff, just saying "The city was built, the police were formed, the army was well dressed...", but even so, just the idea and the execution process excited me, the concept Isekai is old, Fairy Tales fanfics are rare, but being reborn as Farquaad... that's original and I'd be very happy if the author continued it.
wow, the guy is basically going to have to put up with being a hero until he dies? On the wedding day he runs out of nowhere to save someone? or on the wedding night? birth of the child? important meeting? Even in old age with a fragile body, will he be forced to jump out of bed and run to save the day? this curse was really very heavy, so heavy that this story lost all the little attractiveness it already had, honestly even those do or die systems seem softer now.
Constant comments from the author during and after the chapter that completely break the immersion, breaking the fourth wall, ultra short chapters + comments, so much so that you wonder if you are reading a story or a Twitter post from a Hardcore otaku. Another negative point is the unknown Pokemons, as the reader has no knowledge of them, it is easy to forget their characteristics, so the imagination of battles is harmed. Overall, it's too tiring, silly, and boring to continue.
So, it's boring. The development of the story practically follows the original, adding the protagonist's annoying brother, the writing is weak, making me feel that the character is lifeless and just a Mob that must have appeared in the original just to die somewhere and give a power up in the protagonist for losing his brother. Moreover the author leave the couples from the original with no changes, the story is basically about the protagonist's generic brother, I wanted to keep reading because to be honest it's not the worst romance I've ever read, but my eyes won't stop rolling, so I just gave up.
Ah, thanks for the answer, I don't like NTR, in any way actually, not even Netori, but this one i can handle it. "Part 2..." already left me with one foot behind just by sharing it with others, but what really removed both feet was that there is more than one protagonist, that for me is even worse than NTR, hahaha. Anyway, it's better to know now than to be filled with rage while reading, I'll keep the review 5 stars.
I'm not the author, but I'll answer you anyway. It's a Chinese translation, they have very strict laws regarding pornography in general, even novels like this are limited, so 99.999...% of Chinese novels do not show sex scenes, at most they hint at very veiled ways of declaring the act . Now, if the translator wants to add smut on his own, it's up to him.