very fast, very confusing, little background construction. starts with an interesting premise, but ends up losing its luster, personally I liked it better when it started full of pride, but adding a cheap novel out of nowhere, giving an idea like “violence only generates violence” or even changing the life perspective of people with a few words, you should go back to africa when the Europeans arrived there and enslaved the blacks, try the same trick and the "talk no jutsu" will work yes, you can trust.
GodofTruth
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LIKEI get what you're saying but if every chapter is the same old Pride this and that beat this guy kill that guy the novel would eventually lose its luster. I also understand why you are put off by the Protaganist using "Talk no jutsu" but as stated they were conflicted from the begining although the slavery part is understandable. Though the didnt really have a choice in the manner anyway to be honest how were they going to get home to their families if they didnt have the money or food to travel back. So they needed to try and leach on the strongest and richest person they knew. althought the last part I know that talk no jutsu wont work the whole reason for them going to africa was in search for new land and they found slaves along with it. They needed expansion so they got it. Thank you for reading my novel and have a good day.✌
I get what you're saying but if every chapter is the same old Pride this and that beat this guy kill that guy the novel would eventually lose its luster. I also understand why you are put off by the Protaganist using "Talk no jutsu" but as stated they were conflicted from the begining although the slavery part is understandable. Though the didnt really have a choice in the manner anyway to be honest how were they going to get home to their families if they didnt have the money or food to travel back. So they needed to try and leach on the strongest and richest person they knew. althought the last part I know that talk no jutsu wont work the whole reason for them going to africa was in search for new land and they found slaves along with it. They needed expansion so they got it. Thank you for reading my novel and have a good day.✌