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I honestly expected more from this, it was ridiculous at the beginning but I hoped that it would improve but it actually got worse. The MC has ****ty personality and wants to kill Danzo but never acts. Minato is still hokage but bends his ass for Danzo to **** him. Almost all other characters have degraded to betas who bend over for the MC I had to drop it when the MC forced a woman to give him a blowjob to preserve her life and this was out of no context. Anyway if you enjoy reading about a degenerate MC, this is the novel for you.
You dumdfuck!...hey author you have good grammar and english but what the **** dude? A tail..a fucking tail the MC has.....he'd obviously be reported to the hokage the moment the saw that **** and mot likely been experimented on..what BS saying it took 6 months for the Kage to know about it// Complete BS
If you donβt like scum protagonists who come a hairs breadth from raping women, this book is not for you. Book starts off ok, MC however does get strong real fast, at one point he gets attacked by enemy ninja and forces a girl to suck him off or die. I stopped reading after this. What is even more disgusting than this act, is the fact that many readers were laughing at and defending this type of behaviour.
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I don't care what the haters say, this is a great fanfic. Yes there are some plot problems like how will Naruto and Sasuke become friends if Sasuke refuses to ask for help while Naruto has become a bit of a d*ckhead. You can't have a proper Naruto fanfic without Sasuke being as strong or a bit stronger than Naruto. Also MC did go a bit overboard getting a blowjob from a girl trying to follow orders passed down from her village, I didn't mind the BJ I just think that MC had just gone down the psychopathic path. Over all great fanfic, keep it up!
Canon rehash with minor changes that do jackshit to the overall story. Most of the missions described are simply naruto events where he's spectating. The few times he does get involved he has a fight but nothing that really changes things... All in all, with the character not being very likable, there's no point in reading this.
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all in all the story concept isn't bad bit the chapter length sucks and putting the Characters name before a : which proceeds their sentence implies lack of skill. it'd be much easier to read if if was like: ''Sage your a future pillar of Konoha.'' Says Lord Fourth. instead it's like a poorly built structure with substandard materials. Thus Despite what this review says its a 1.5 star rating
well... i thought it's gonna be a great fan-fic to see but instead I'm really disappointed review: Grammar: good Stability of updates:well I guess good? not like I will read this anymore- Character design: THE MC IS A LITERAL FOOL- not the funny type but fool- fool Story development: THE STORY IS BECOMING WORSE AND WORSE WITH EACH CHAPTER final evaluation:2.4(just for the grammar,the world background and the stability of updates everything else is -)