Review Detail of Rotting_Corpse in A Saiyan in the Multiverse
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I honestly expected more from this, it was ridiculous at the beginning but I hoped that it would improve but it actually got worse. The MC has ****ty personality and wants to kill Danzo but never acts. Minato is still hokage but bends his ass for Danzo to **** him. Almost all other characters have degraded to betas who bend over for the MC I had to drop it when the MC forced a woman to give him a blowjob to preserve her life and this was out of no context. Anyway if you enjoy reading about a degenerate MC, this is the novel for you.
A Saiyan in the Multiverse
Kintaro1210
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tommy_king:1) he kills Danzo 2) that woman tried to kill mc. I don’t see you complaining about that.
LOL are you stupid ???? Level 1 acc, must be a troll??? haha maybe they just joined ????? Just MAYBE theyre new ? Anyways, He kills danzo. Yes however wayy after the blowjob. Ngl didnt rly mind that he waited, you see it in every naruto fanfic. That woman tried to kill him? yes... that is the naruto verse in a nutshell, dont need to complain about it cause its part of that world. Ignoring all this... agree 100% with this review. This Fandom if you can call it that, has no plot, no story. The Author literally does things on whims, changing thing with no context. It makes NO sense whatsoever. The whole thing with ino later on is just sad aswell.. Maybe you like this 'story' you do you. But dont hate on other reviews and call them trolls cause you dont like what they wrote. I mean if they where a troll, Id clap cause I cbf to write that much if I was just trolling Lmao GL to the Author obv he likes this so Keep it up. Bye
tommy_king:Plus this is a lvl 1 account so it’s prob a troll as the only activity is this 1 star review.
Ok. I call this account a troll because they joined in the same month that they only commented on this story and never again (still haven’t) if you look on anyone else’s there will be an update on the their account regularly with likes or comments. You said people trying to kill mc isn’t worth talking about because it’s common in a world like that. Ok fine. But In “a world like this” wouldn’t rape or sexual assault like the forced bj be common as well, so we don’t need to talk about that either.
Aeternabilis:LOL are you stupid ???? Level 1 acc, must be a troll??? haha maybe they just joined ????? Just MAYBE theyre new ? Anyways, He kills danzo. Yes however wayy after the blowjob. Ngl didnt rly mind that he waited, you see it in every naruto fanfic. That woman tried to kill him? yes... that is the naruto verse in a nutshell, dont need to complain about it cause its part of that world. Ignoring all this... agree 100% with this review. This Fandom if you can call it that, has no plot, no story. The Author literally does things on whims, changing thing with no context. It makes NO sense whatsoever. The whole thing with ino later on is just sad aswell.. Maybe you like this 'story' you do you. But dont hate on other reviews and call them trolls cause you dont like what they wrote. I mean if they where a troll, Id clap cause I cbf to write that much if I was just trolling Lmao GL to the Author obv he likes this so Keep it up. Bye
Author does things on his own whims? Errrrrr, That what a author can do, It’s his fan-fic. With no context. The mc was op, so why not basically own/suppress the other villages. I totally agree with you on the Ino thing as I like her character after the fan girl thing with emo kid. I also don’t understand why author ended it with her 🤷🏻♂️🤷🏻♂️🤷🏻♂️
Aeternabilis:LOL are you stupid ???? Level 1 acc, must be a troll??? haha maybe they just joined ????? Just MAYBE theyre new ? Anyways, He kills danzo. Yes however wayy after the blowjob. Ngl didnt rly mind that he waited, you see it in every naruto fanfic. That woman tried to kill him? yes... that is the naruto verse in a nutshell, dont need to complain about it cause its part of that world. Ignoring all this... agree 100% with this review. This Fandom if you can call it that, has no plot, no story. The Author literally does things on whims, changing thing with no context. It makes NO sense whatsoever. The whole thing with ino later on is just sad aswell.. Maybe you like this 'story' you do you. But dont hate on other reviews and call them trolls cause you dont like what they wrote. I mean if they where a troll, Id clap cause I cbf to write that much if I was just trolling Lmao GL to the Author obv he likes this so Keep it up. Bye
Maybe they just stopped ? The comment doesent sound like a troll as it's reasonable.. even has 10 likes soo Yes, that would be common. HOWEVER, to the scum of that world it is. Killing is necessary for them, for defence of there village, missions etc. However do they go to the woman of that verse and rape them ? Say kakashi ? Guy ? Minato ? Naruto ? No.. they have morals. With how the mc acted you can see that he is scum... if you get what im tryna say ?
tommy_king:Ok. I call this account a troll because they joined in the same month that they only commented on this story and never again (still haven’t) if you look on anyone else’s there will be an update on the their account regularly with likes or comments. You said people trying to kill mc isn’t worth talking about because it’s common in a world like that. Ok fine. But In “a world like this” wouldn’t rape or sexual assault like the forced bj be common as well, so we don’t need to talk about that either.
Yeah, he can change it on his own whims and it is his fanfic.. however by doing this it makes it extremely bad, impossible to read and can it be called a real fanfic ? no. All it was, was him following canon and randomly changing things that make no sense. One thing he does that, line later he does something completely opposite. No context, no reason. Just cause he is the author. But by doing this can he be called a real author ? I guess.. but a terribly shtty one. Tbh I had no problem with the op mc rly, seen plenty of them but its his attitude, personality and the no reasoning/context that made me drop. Also he can suppress them all etc but then where is the story gone ? It was finished in like chap 10 lmao unless he started to change universes then nothing left of the 'story' just following canon. Plus all he does with his 'power' his threatens we saw fck all of him acc using it for anything until he killed danzo. However that was like what ? chap 32 or something. We never acc saw ANY changes he made.. Naruto was the same, massacre happened.. everything followed canon. If he acc used that power and say he did conquer the other villages it would make it way more interesting. With the ino thing, I feel it was bc of the people in the comments..
tommy_king:Author does things on his own whims? Errrrrr, That what a author can do, It’s his fan-fic. With no context. The mc was op, so why not basically own/suppress the other villages. I totally agree with you on the Ino thing as I like her character after the fan girl thing with emo kid. I also don’t understand why author ended it with her 🤷🏻♂️🤷🏻♂️🤷🏻♂️
Aeternabilis:Maybe they just stopped ? The comment doesent sound like a troll as it's reasonable.. even has 10 likes soo Yes, that would be common. HOWEVER, to the scum of that world it is. Killing is necessary for them, for defence of there village, missions etc. However do they go to the woman of that verse and rape them ? Say kakashi ? Guy ? Minato ? Naruto ? No.. they have morals. With how the mc acted you can see that he is scum... if you get what im tryna say ?
Aeternabilis:Yeah, he can change it on his own whims and it is his fanfic.. however by doing this it makes it extremely bad, impossible to read and can it be called a real fanfic ? no. All it was, was him following canon and randomly changing things that make no sense. One thing he does that, line later he does something completely opposite. No context, no reason. Just cause he is the author. But by doing this can he be called a real author ? I guess.. but a terribly shtty one. Tbh I had no problem with the op mc rly, seen plenty of them but its his attitude, personality and the no reasoning/context that made me drop. Also he can suppress them all etc but then where is the story gone ? It was finished in like chap 10 lmao unless he started to change universes then nothing left of the 'story' just following canon. Plus all he does with his 'power' his threatens we saw fck all of him acc using it for anything until he killed danzo. However that was like what ? chap 32 or something. We never acc saw ANY changes he made.. Naruto was the same, massacre happened.. everything followed canon. If he acc used that power and say he did conquer the other villages it would make it way more interesting. With the ino thing, I feel it was bc of the people in the comments..
Chado_Sama:They literally kidnap women to breed for bloodlines. Pretty sure they have no problem with rape...
Mc and ino were going out but Ino saw that Sakura didn’t like saskue anymore so she dumped mc for saskue, but saskue was to focused on naruto being better than him and didn’t care about ino. And mc moved on to mei. Ultimately ino went out with itachi even though itachi already had a girlfriend.
newthings:so too many comments, but no one explaining what happened with ino?
no matter what she wanted to do, he could just kill her, than rape her. And why do you protect the rapist?
tommy_king:1) he kills Danzo 2) that woman tried to kill mc. I don’t see you complaining about that.
Daoist198784:no matter what she wanted to do, he could just kill her, than rape her. And why do you protect the rapist?
You're blaming the mc as if it's his fault. The girl tried to kill him, he ra*ed her.. I know for some cuckold guys like you just because she's a girl she didn't deserve it. The Ninja world is full of people killing eachother from the back + mc is a saiyan which makes him even more crazy AND not even talking about his hormones all that stuff added up it's simply not that suprising.. yet even before thinking about this, you just point fingers
Daoist198784:How did I defend the killer?
I am not defending this particular girl, I say in principle that rape is immoral. And why did you insult me?
Pyoug:You're blaming the mc as if it's his fault. The girl tried to kill him, he ra*ed her.. I know for some cuckold guys like you just because she's a girl she didn't deserve it. The Ninja world is full of people killing eachother from the back + mc is a saiyan which makes him even more crazy AND not even talking about his hormones all that stuff added up it's simply not that suprising.. yet even before thinking about this, you just point fingers
Moreover, assassins in the ninja world are normal, unlike rape. In the ninja world, every second person has killed.
Pyoug:You're blaming the mc as if it's his fault. The girl tried to kill him, he ra*ed her.. I know for some cuckold guys like you just because she's a girl she didn't deserve it. The Ninja world is full of people killing eachother from the back + mc is a saiyan which makes him even more crazy AND not even talking about his hormones all that stuff added up it's simply not that suprising.. yet even before thinking about this, you just point fingers
Daoist198784:I am not defending this particular girl, I say in principle that rape is immoral. And why did you insult me?