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southgamez
southgamezLv154yrsouthgamez

I don't care what the haters say, this is a great fanfic. Yes there are some plot problems like how will Naruto and Sasuke become friends if Sasuke refuses to ask for help while Naruto has become a bit of a d*ckhead. You can't have a proper Naruto fanfic without Sasuke being as strong or a bit stronger than Naruto. Also MC did go a bit overboard getting a blowjob from a girl trying to follow orders passed down from her village, I didn't mind the BJ I just think that MC had just gone down the psychopathic path. Over all great fanfic, keep it up!

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A Saiyan in the Multiverse

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CIiff_Hanger
CIiff_HangerLv11CIiff_Hanger

Yes its a great novel but some of the plot holes are really glaring to those who know a decent amount of the world he is in.