Reviews of Goddess Collector (Stopped and rewritten under new title.)
Goddess Collector (Stopped and rewritten under new title.)
FanHarem
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
To be honest i had clicked this thinking it would have been some Pick up girls in a dungeon fanfic but boy was i blown away...The first chapter caught me off guard but i continued for... *cough* research purposes. But the story is real well developed. Even with going to different worlds from different anime the author gives enough information that even if you have no knowledge of said anime u can still follow along without any issue. Character development is done really well and nobody has been left forgotten so far with each girl having their own distinct personality but in a lot of cases their character gets developed a lot more in their respective anime. Highly recommend reading! P.S The H...*cough* research scenes are pretty well done too and its never the same thing as each girl has their different kinks in which the Mc has no shame in using against them.
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Well, time for not so shameless review. Giving myself 4 star cause I am trying really hard and since this is my first novel, I really don't deserve five stars. Either way, this novel isn't intended to be a journey for power as the mc travels through the multiverse. Neither is it the story of a guy who puts his D in any P. I wanted to write about a manwhore who slowly finds his emotions and treasures the people believing in him, instead of simply tossing them away. Mc is a scum, so am I, the author. I don't need more revelation about my or my protagonist's nature. All I want to do is, write. Add hentai characters, game chracters, anime characters, dc/marvel/cartoon characters. I will be adding the predestined girls, but sure, I may think about adding your preference. Lastly, sorry for improper vocabulary or any deficiency in my writing.
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Before,I would actually flame this story with passion,but admittedly would still read it.But I don't want to read it more,so it would be mostly fast list of problems,and good parts of the story. Good things! This is good slice of life comedy,in a good tradition of akkikan works(that just steal concept of slice of life,from chinese multiverse fanfics,but tss!Remember,no plagiarism!) So if someone was off put by novel name,sinopsys or first 10 chapter- don't fret,there nothing bad to you fragile innocent souls! There is a lot of girls! And they so lovely and fluffy! They characters mostly intact,so as fanfic,it's take care of you precious wifey! Story is fine,nothing serious and not much trouble mc would have,even if some of them sounds like a big deal.So nothing could disturb you, from what is real treasure of the story- girls! Bad parts.....It's ironic but all bad parts is actually all good parts of the story.....What they say,too much of anyting can be a poison. It is slice of life story,when mc don't do anything until he treated to be put in grave......Well,yeah,he is on another level of existence,,,, Comedy parts and his guild members,take all t-ension(the word is banned,ARE YOU SERIOUS!?) and problems of the story,far more efficient and better,then nik ever could....I don't even wanna talk,of how much running gags here(first 10 times is okay,but no more) Character of mc is.....ugh...I would honestly say,he's development is horrible,but it's here.It certainly was how autor wants him to be....You see,he is like shanks without being op ,and more be like apathetic, shamless, pervert......Very convenient for story, I must say. And about him being incubus and whatnot.....he don't actually have lust or want's girls.....sigh.All sex scene,is good ,but it's so repetitive,there is like only two scene,that different from all others....And it's very mild,if nik wouldn't mention that he is demon of lust,I would forget.....so kudos,for remainding. Story itself lack any kind of t-ension,and tend to have chapters only on one small joke,or some cuddling....well,that is slice of life,what you expect? Girls handled only in fluffy-lovely way,that make it very boring....if you make it same as others,it's doesn't make me appreciate efforts that mc spends on her. Conclusion! It's a good story,but I'm not going to continue that,it's just too boring... But! Give it a chance,it's not bad,especially if you like slice of life with comedy,or akkikan works(someone trully like them?! Say it to me ,when you read at least 500 chapters of his *best* works,sigh).Adios amigos!
Writing quality- ⭐⭐ He knows how to write English which is a big deal on this platform. Still many grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. In short readable. Story Development- ⭐ Let's be honest it's dogshit. I would have liked to give some supportive and constructive criticism but nothing would change the FACT that it's dogshit. Character Design-⭐ Wow. MC is a scum. Like on the level of the most hated people in fiction and literature. Best comparison would be to a death row rapist or child trafficker. It's just disgusting. Updating Stability-⭐⭐⭐⭐ Even though the entire novel is just abhorrent atleast the Author delivers on his deadlines and updates frequently though I stopped caring about this novel since the first chapter but I gave it a chance, read it all the through and then gave my review and I just kept hating the novel by every chapter. I don't like giving half hearted reviews or start bashing the novel reading 5 or 10 chapters. World Background-⭐ The MC keeps jumping world to world in order fuck anything that, as the title says, resembles a hole. So don't expect any background development or character development of any character in the novel and barely so for the MC. It's my honest and maybe a little biased review of the novel. If the author is offended, man I don't know what to you other than the fact that your mc is just horseshit. And any of you reader who get offended and start saying shit about me and defending the novel, I hope your mothers and sisters get raped and then I parade this novel in front you saying that this is just fiction no need to get salty about it and let's see how you feel about glorifying rape or just a barbaric "alpha" edgy and evil MC you would like to be. There are plenty of other evil MC that have more depth in them make you think about morality and it's implications and its hypocrisy in society. This MC just does rapes and **** anything that moves..... I hate it I fuckin hate it.
I don’t know the author wrote a novel, or just a set of letters, because the endurance even on "literotica" is more than here. The hero falls from the sky, and that’s all ... an ox-wagon drove, all the girls attack him, all this is accompanied by “romantically refined” tenderness that makes me sick, this is not the author’s maturity. Extremely weak, contrast, stop, no. Just a tractor that is carried on rails. I can give an example of a wonderful novel where there is **** with a plot, for example - an "online evil dragon against heaven". This, one of the worst that I ever read, I am usually too lazy to write reviews, but when the novel is already angry, then I'm sorry.
