Konoha Village, I Defected From Hyuga Branch House

BWAHAHAHAHA LIU QIYUN LOL

I'm interested in joining your patre0n, but the chapters seem to get shorter and shorter and I'm not sure if it is worth it tbh

I've noticed that the chapter is getting shorter and shorter, you mentioned that the patre0n chapter is 7 chapters ahead but I doubted it, I think it's more like two chapters sliced into 7 chapters lol

Bruh, a name like Ryuuto would've been perfect

Yo, are you dead?

what a horrendous name

yo, are you alive?

This whole arc already took 18 CHAPTERS LONG. C'mon dude, just end it already

I've been skipping this whole saving-some-clan-that-I-don't-really-care arc since it's just so boring, and I just don't care about them. how long are you gonna drag this?

One more thing, Mc's doesn't know the existence of ROOT, which makes the hole hiding-your-strength thing more idiotic

Mc's decided not to show his strength because he sensed that some people are watching him, but how the fuck did he get so powerful after graduation? it felt as if he is been training since academy time. I felt that it made no sense when Mc decided to hide his strength without explanation at first, but after he mentioned that he was being watched it felt like another plot hole are being opened, as I mentioned, how did he get so powerful? in my opinion, The author's attempts at justifying Mc's behaviour during the academy arc just resulted in another plot hole

Bob Uchiha

he's such a simp for Naruto

your mom

I guess that is one way to put it but, a positive outcome that she unknowingly causes, doesn't excuse her irresponsibility

not even 20 chapters in and it turns into a cultivation novel, still tolerable I guess and is it just me or chapters are getting shorter... like WAY shorter

this is such a good story, a breath of fresh air on the DXD fanfic section. I just love how different it is from most of the DXD ffs on this site, instead of following the 'main story' like most DXD ffs does, here the MC have his own plot- that is separate yet still intertwined with the main plot that quite interesting on its own, and the fact that his personality is unique and funny made it so much better

it's Hizashi not Hiashi, my bad

Overall, it's a good story with fewer if not no grammatical errors, a definite rarity on this site But, there are just a few things about some of the characters that I hate 1. I absolutely hate MC'S mother. after her husband's death, she has the genius idea of getting pumped by Hyuga Hiashi, which led to her pregnancy, so they decided to move out of the clan compound with no financial support, which in turn made her child's life miserable for two months. Yet the MC doesn't seem to even resent her for her irresponsibility, keep in mind that in order to get help for their financial situation, the MC need to beg a lot of people, as for Hiashi... THE DUDE JUST BAILED!! he doesn't help her because of his status as a Hyuga and her status as an Uchiha... But why he doesn't help her secretly? all he did was sends a bunch of toys for his son lol Nobody seems to question her action... NOBODY, the MC just ignored it, his mom doesn't regret it either lol Don't get me wrong I don't have a problem if she wants a fling or two... but with a fking Hyuga?!?! she must've been aware of the repercussions, yet she let her two kids, who are barely even a teenager takes care of her boyfriend kid And more infuriatingly, the Author still paint her as a good person, there just seems to be these ' good character' labels slapped onto her forehead in short, she is an irresponsible mother, who doesn't face her responsibility or seem to care about her child's well being 2. Sometimes I am annoyed by MC's lack of effort, but that's fine I'm still waiting for the 'character development' the Author promised.... yeah nope, it's already chapter 44 and a year or so from the Uchiha massacre, this is his second life and he needs to man up