Review Detail of TOFIE in Goddess Collector (Stopped and rewritten under new title.)

I see, I apologise that this novel did not suit your taste. Thank you for giving it a try.

Oh plz if you were in the MC's situation you would have done the same thing.

What situation? Huh? The fckk are you on about. We are introduced to a rape scene there is no fuckingg situation. This is the first chapter. Girl is training thinking about a guy and then in thin air, The MC appears and rapes the girl without consent. I ain't not fucking rapists who thinks with his dick and fucks any girl on sight.

The Author dosen't give the reason or tells us why he raped the girl. He just does it? seriously.

LurkingImmortal, Fix your fucking comment dick head and don't make assumptions.

I stopped reading at chapter two, out of curiosity, but since I already know how this Mc will be for the remaining chapters I dropped it. I am not scum, so I can't relate to scum. So I don't need to read this novel.

Ummm... first of all, thank you for the review, like I said, I don't mind critique or opinions. But I would still like to insist that you at least try and read till chapter 10. But it's just my opinion. And after the tenth chapter, if you still don't like my novel, I don't really mind. Once again, of you have the time, please try and read till chapter 10

The MC didn't really have much choice for the first girl, she was his timed initiation to the system. This story gets much better, way better than Dual Cultivation. I really liked Dual at first(and I actually still read it), but the author got to greedy. And quite frankly I like this authors style better.

You can read the novels from this site on others for free without spirit stones, I realised that the female characters are in fact original characters from other sources. Which is interesting,

so?.... did my writing manage to change your views even the slightest bit?

I've read to the beginning of the Avatar arc, The Mc is overbearing when it comes to the scene of the mother of that antagonist kid. I don't like rape, but you become dull to it after reading so much of it. I still don't like the Mc, but I understand a little bit of why he did what he did. I find the Mc being ruthless all of a sudden during the Avatar arc very weird and there were no signs that he was a fighter. It didn't fit his character very well. I felt that scene where he took care of the earth benders very weird, but I do remember the scene of how he opened that large door in the gymnasium I believe...bodybuilders. I will have to read further to find out, I enjoy reading the explicit scene with Souka or Red Head sister. I like the sex scenes, but I believe the interactions with him and the other girls besides the Souma family is very forced and unnatural. Does he not know how to make meaning for relationships? I believe unless he forces himself upon the girl will be the only way he can make them accept him, From a realistic perspective this guy would immediately be in jail, so I would love to read more about him building his relationship with each harem member. I got pissed off when he had to go to another world without exploring the current world. I will read more.

well, he realises much in his avatar arc and most of the problems you mentioned have already been put on the solution mode. As for interaction, I am extremely bad at it. Narration is my thing, not the interaction.

bro how would ik u said anything if u didnt hit the reply button but just commented? and i wont change what i said nobody likes or supports the act of rape but unless you are a saint or someone who truly values the life of strangers you never met above your own you would have do same thing to the first girl.

Didn’t see any rape there!

Wrong, even Nik admitted he did it without her consent. It doesn't matter if the other person physically enjoys it, no conscious, uncoerced, consent = rape.

True that!

its nice that someone else has decency...........everyone is weird,,,thats fine,,,,but rape is trash

What's worse is that they try to justify it, its like the people here are like animals.

Rape is rape,Having sex without there consent is trash. No matter what your reasoning of the situation is

That could have been your sister or your mother, what would you do if someone did that to her, you wouldn't be saying that he had a valid reasoning to rape. Rape is Rape and rape is trash, don't justify it.