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LurkingImmortal

LurkingImmortal

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2017-11-07 JoinedGlobal
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal3mth
    Commented

    Rather get rid of the % in front of the 31 its throwing me off...

    -Psychic Energy: 31%/100%
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    The Tale of the Void Emperor
    Fantasy ¡ LivingVoid
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
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    I binge read up to the current chapters, honestly for the people that started this novel before it passed 150 i can only say that i tip my hat off to you. Writing Quality is great, the world building is amazing as the ideas that Author has in some of these places just highlights that the whole fantasy aspect of the story. Anyway i didn't write this to say good things tbh. My Realization and Complaints: Sunny Sunny Sunny, our dare MC if I can really call him that sure the story from his point of view but a lot of story other than his first trial in the first few chapters focus on Neph the female lead. I didn't particularly care at first I'm all for watching my MC's grow into someone capable of the title, Neph was more powerful, more experienced and more knowledgeable than our MC due to the difference in their backgrounds so when the MC asked to be taught by her i found it reasonable I didn't even care about to slow growing dependence/borderline obsession that was taking place because i knew at some point they would separate and the foundation he build with her as his mentor would start to show themselves as he became independent. This is the my main reason i continued to read because I believe the pay off would be worth just based on how good the Author was writing and in a sense it was. After around 150+ the Mc was no longer as many would say useless but I was increasingly annoyed by how he viewed himself as weak regardless of the amazing things he did that only a few people in existence in the story could do, but i still overlooked this as our MC had many flaws and insecurities and he was in fact still growing and would slowly overcome them which proved true in later chapters. THAT IS UNTIL around chapter 350, this is a big turning point for a lot of readers in the story due to many reasons. But around here we finally get to see Neph's status page, and it was crushing for me because it really made me feel that my dream of seeing the MC surpass and become the strongest was nothing but a joke. At least that's how I felt, the MC was just destined to be her powerful shadow/right hand in the grand scheme of things, she had her insane goal and obsession and the MC would become powerful enough to help see it come to fruition. This to me is just the biggest disappointment in this entire story mainly due to my personal preferences though. Idk what plans to author has later on but ill still be reading with faint hope of seeing our MC become the strongest regardless of the circumstances surrounding his relationship with Neph who seems to be written in a way that it makes her seem like the actual main character among other things.

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy ¡ Guiltythree
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
    Commented

    I'm lost

    Even if she tried to think positively, that was not possible right now, not with the dread that was filling her heart about the outcome.
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    Odyssey of the Blind God
    Fantasy ¡ HideousGrain
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
    Commented

    Bro what's that like 4 paragraphs that could of just been one. We know all this stuff already.

    Knowing what he had to do in order to gain the most benefits was important, and that was exactly what he hadn't done because he had been way too focused on short-term gains.
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    Odyssey of the Blind God
    Fantasy ¡ HideousGrain
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
    Commented

    This author really likes to waste time explaining simple stuff...Even some of the main characters inner monologue don't need to be this long and some are just simply unnecessary. Hopefully this changes later on.

    Hence, there was no way someone would be the same as others.
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    Odyssey of the Blind God
    Fantasy ¡ HideousGrain
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
    Commented

    bro we get it focus on the fighting part already...

    It was now paying off and every kill gave him a renewed sense of confidence- of not being useless, of being strong enough to support his family financially, and of curing his sister.
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    Odyssey of the Blind God
    Fantasy ¡ HideousGrain
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
    Commented

    this chapter should be called Depression rather than its current title lol

    Ch 2 Awakened
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    Odyssey of the Blind God
    Fantasy ¡ HideousGrain
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
    Commented

    you kno reading back over I only just now noticed this....honestly I never heard this moon terminology before I thought nasa threw a giant nightlight up in the sky during the nights for people with bad eye sight...guess u learn something new everyday.

    With the Blessings, little by little the humans managed to reconquer their space on the conquered planets, making humanity, which before had difficulty even going to the moon (the satellite closest to their home planet), now able to inhabit several planets across the galaxy.
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy ¡ Zhanye
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal1yr
    Commented

    Strange Glint here Strange Glint there Strange Glint everywhere...

    To think that this handsome guy's father was actually a veteran soldier with military rank Colonel. Bai Zemin had a strange glint and his gaze could not help but shift slightly towards Shangguan Bing Xue... Then, her background should be similar or superior to Chen He's.
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy ¡ XIETIAN
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Replied to dord

    yeah

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    Goddess Collector (Stopped and rewritten under new title.)
    Anime & Comics ¡ FanHarem
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Replied to Anany

    500 IQ deductions bro loool

    "You are probably the guardian of this underground secret treasure. You remained underground throughout the years, and that is why you killed those people who tried to invade your underground territory." Lin Jiufeng calmly deduced.
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    80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace, I Am Unrivalled
    Eastern ¡ Girls Are Cute
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    Among the Flowers? Where do i join? Asking for a friend...

    The Among Flowers Sect truly was a despicable sect whose agenda was kidnapping beautiful women and doing unspeakable things to them. Their actions had angered the young emperor and he ordered a holy decree, sending 100,000 troops to crush the Among Flowers Sect.
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    80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace, I Am Unrivalled
    Eastern ¡ Girls Are Cute
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Replied to Darkoneko

    the snakes and rodents [img=recommend]

    Once closed, it would be difficult to open this door in the future.
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    80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace, I Am Unrivalled
    Eastern ¡ Girls Are Cute
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    seems like he's gonna learn to fly later on...

    "If only this elf body comes with an ability to fly.." Tristan thought in his head.
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    Blood Elf Monarch
    Fantasy ¡ Avan
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    I wouldn't say it's the most important but it certainly a aspect of it in certain situations lol

    The important key to a successful bluff was to stare at the target with even more emotion, expressing it directly to the eyes of the adversary. Tristan needed to have perfect confidence in his bluff in order to make others eat it.
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    Blood Elf Monarch
    Fantasy ¡ Avan
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    I haven't played Warhammer or warcraft so all this is new to me lol

    One particular figure at the helm of the group caught Tristan's attention because of how striking they looked. A massive white tiger with a female elf sitting on top of it.
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    Blood Elf Monarch
    Fantasy ¡ Avan
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    my mom's closet

    'What kind of world have my sister and I have been thrown into?'
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    Blood Elf Monarch
    Fantasy ¡ Avan
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    Sounds like the Power Rangers loool

    "Sensor detected a ship. Its space knight"
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    Blood Elf Monarch
    Fantasy ¡ Avan
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    I'd Smash either way

    "Eyes up, Tris! I know you have been locked up for four years and never seen girls, but don't start falling for your sister now.. That's just so twisted!"
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    Blood Elf Monarch
    Fantasy ¡ Avan
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  • LurkingImmortal
    LurkingImmortal2yr
    Commented

    but what about the wild life? 🤔

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    Unlimited Power - The Arcane Path (COMPLETED)
    Fantasy ¡ ExSoldierLv99
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