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Primordial Smith

Tunahan

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  • Writing Quality
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  • Character Design
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Tunahan
TunahanAuthorTunahan

There is not much to say to my own book so thanks for reading my book and this senseless comment. İf you found a mistake or want to give your advice, that would be great for me. This is my first writing a book/novel so every help counted

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Yanorth
YanorthLv13Yanorth

This novel is just fantastic, I'm can see a few grammar errors but isn't that bad, loving the idea of the novel, I'm love any novel with craft system

Drifting_Clouds
Drifting_CloudsLv5Drifting_Clouds

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

TheCeddel
TheCeddelLv14TheCeddel

I also really enjoy the Setup and hope, that you can keep up the good work. It has a really unique worldbuilding and a good amount of Slice of Live which I enjoy. The Action has also a nice timing, so that you don't get bored and just thinking about what he will build next is keeping me tense.

MrSnow
MrSnowLv11MrSnow

So far im really enjoying this, keep up the good work, love both the story and premise just maybe clean up the "status" and especially "quest" screens a bit

BigNovelBigDream
BigNovelBigDreamLv1BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

cookergirl5
cookergirl5Lv1cookergirl5

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Lukas_West
Lukas_WestLv1Lukas_West

Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!Update! Update Update! Update! Update! Update! Update! Update!

zd4zaaa
zd4zaaaLv1zd4zaaa

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dudeoftitties
dudeoftittiesLv5dudeoftitties

Update or give the book to someone cause I really like it and want it to continue until its complete. Please don't let it die. I'll give you my free passes?

Jepsx
JepsxLv3Jepsx

Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.Update. please.

Elina_K
Elina_KLv1Elina_K

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demioch
demiochLv6demioch

I'll be honest I'm rating it 5 because I'm hoping you will continue this book and keep it going although its been awhile since an update I sincerely hope you can keep this story going or because not only is it good ( a lot of people like r18 scenes as well just saying) but it also has an interesting way of developing I'll be waiting for updates I hope you have a good day by the way and happy thanksgiving

Piotr_Uklejewski
Piotr_UklejewskiLv4Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

Cragens
CragensLv12Cragens

Reveal spoiler

THEIMMORTALDhantos
THEIMMORTALDhantosLv4THEIMMORTALDhantos

badbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadbadBADBADBADBADBAD. NOt update how cruel life is

Drifting_Clouds
Drifting_CloudsLv5Drifting_Clouds

Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update Come on update !

BookDeity
BookDeityLv4BookDeity

this novel gives me Far Cry Primal vibes 😂 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999

Quinlan_Lightfoot
Quinlan_LightfootLv12Quinlan_Lightfoot

I’m hoping there’s an update soon as it is a fun book. The world is interesting and there is a lot left to discover, the story is a bit fast paced but the Author has said he will work on it.

ryeshl
ryeshlLv14ryeshl

My type of novel with decent character and world building. Hope to have more consistent updates 👍 You can push the smithing levelling a bit more as I love skill developement and the MC's levelling process. Keep up the good work!