5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

Flowing through all, there is balance. There is no peace without a passion to create. There is no passion without peace to guide. Knowledge fades without the strength to act. Power blinds without the serenity to see. There is freedom in life. There is purpose in death. The Force is all things and I am the Force'

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

<>God Is Here, God Is Gone<> ]:-D ]:-D ]:-D -I love it- ]:-D]:-D ]:-D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, but in my opinion, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, but in my opinion, it is not always for the better. It's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

Sue redirected the focus to the potential danger we narrowly avoided. "Johnny, you were at 4,000 kelvin, a little more higher and you could have gone supernova!" she informed him. Johnny in his childish antics responded with a simple "sweet!" Alex chimed in, saying, "In layman terms, what she meant was, any hotter and you could have cooked everything, including this planet." Johnny, hearing the consequence that could have happened. Responded with a nonchalant "Got it, supernova, bad." ]:->

When all the dark matter was sucked in by Ace, Ace wiped the corner of his mouth. a smile appeared on Ace face: "Teach...., I'm full!" Why doesn't the dark matter attack didn't kill this guy!! Teach thought with a dark heart. Ace's body surface suddenly burst into billowing flames!!! Then, a large amount of darkness also emerged from Ace's body. "WHAT!! THAT IS MY DARK POWER!!!" When they saw the black substance, everyone in Blackbeard Teach was dumbfounded Just when he couldn't figure it out, a roar broke out from Ace's mouth!! "Dark Fire Dragon Mode!!—" ===this is fantastic===

very nice story, I'm on level 28 so far. I highly recommend it, it's a good job, and if someone says otherwise, please write a better one... or stop messing around

well, that's just fantastic. I want more

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It's always nice to read about the MC and his followers, I wonder what Poseidon will do

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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************