Reviews of Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens
Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens
invayne
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This has one of my favorite characters on webnovel. Ah Chun is such an interesting combination of adorable cuteness and murderous destruction. The plot twists are great, the world building is excellent, the character interactions walk a fine line between honoring the caricatures most cultivation novels have and realistic people. To cover the two categories I couldn't in good faith give five stars... The writing quality beats out a large majority of novels here, though a bit more editing would catch the three or four minor errors in each chapter. Not enough to detract from the reading, but often enough to lose a star. The other issue is the release rate, technically I should probably give a full five stars because Mr. Invayne does post the promised amount weekly, but there isn't a set schedule to it. Also, Mr. Invayne is working on four novels actively and divides his time based on popularity, and my poor, sweet, adorable, loli just isn't as popular as his others. So read this novel and vote for it so I get more chapters a week!
I had to stop reading shortly after the 99 samsara thing. Because it was just that bad. We got nearly seventy chapters of an adorable little girl doing adorable little girl things while being somewhat OP and slowly growing up and getting into trouble, and suddenly, BAM! No character development, in one chapter the MC I came to love was gone and in her place was generic cold badass female lead #19274. Also, have a romance that completely bypasses all the troubles it should reasonably have and came out of f-in nowhere really for all that she had a stalker. I came here for cute kid cultivating to immortality, not cold badass in kid body cultivating to immortality with a side of genderflipped wife husbandry. Beyond that, the worldbuilding is nice, I can't fault your writing speed and your writing quality is pretty good, especially for this site. But that 99-lives bull****, man. Why. Y u do dis to adorablest Chun'er.
I’ll start off with the PROS. First off, I just want to mention that this is a CULTIVATION novel with NO REINCARNATION! Crazy right? Actually this can debatable, she wasn’t born with knowledge of her previous lives. Practically all novels with female leads that involves a cultivation based world has reincarnated. This is the only one I found that differs, I can be wrong about the only one though as I haven’t checked out every since one. Bravo! Secondly, this story started off so amazingly, it could be one of the best. Tugged my heartstrings and completely pulled me in. Thirdly, I liked how the female lead is stronger than the male lead, very atypical but I like it. Now the CONS. The synopsis is MISLEADING. When I read the synopsis, I really thought this story would diverge from the normal cultivation novel. And it did for a very short period of time. She goes into this array formation and lives 99 lives and come out and wa-la! She’s now the typical badass smartass, cold, domineering female lead we’re all used too. I really liked her personality as a cute little lolli so that was very disappointing. Secondly, this is debatable but I personally don’t like this. After she lives her 99 lives and realizes her one true love who is always beside her, the romance and the acceptance just skyrockets. No conflicts. No drama. No nothing. Completely smooth sailing. There was no development. One second they hate each other then next second they’re planning their marriage. Not my style at all. But some may like it so it’s up to your preference. Lastly, although I did really like the novel it was sort of a let down for me. I really expected it to diverge completely but I still like cultivation novels so I’ll still go on. If you’re planning to read this, as long as you like reincarnation then it’s fine.
Hello good, I never write reviews but on this occasion I will make an exception since the story you are writing and developing is something that caught my attention since I read the description, this novel is not like others that I have read that receive a inheritance and now, you have to get into all the problems you find, but get a great immortal cultivator as a mother after losing her own. If there is someone reading this review, I suggest you read it because you will not waste your time invested, thank you very much for your hard work and I hope you do not leave it. **: I would like to know if it is possible to characterize them of the cultivation levels that you have developed for this novel, if you think it is a spoiler and you prefer that it be discovered little by little while you build the novel it is also fine.
This story started out pretty good, however, the mc is basically switched for a different one at the 99 lives samsara thing, and even worse once ah chun goes back to help the immortal that gives her the dreamscape ability, she basically restarts from nothing with a different body. And with none of the bloodlines or understandings she had in her 'past life'. Honestly, you might as well just start reading from that point on as it will save you the frustration of literally everything Ah Chun has worked for disappearing. And I can understand her cultivation disappearing, but for her bloodline, her Dao's (which are supposed to just be understanding, and she didn't lose any memory's) and both her cultivation and her cultivation technique, and her spiritual roots. It might as well be an entirely different novel from that point on, with mc's that have the same name and personality. Though the story up to that point is great.
I LOVEE this NOVEL!!!!!!!!!!! My utmost favourite!!! Usually, the updates are really nice. But recently they have decreased by A LOT!! I hope the author is alright!! Since a lot of people are probably SUPER stressed over quarantine and covid-19. Please update when you are ready!!! (also can you specify usually how many updates per week your gonna have?!) There is a lot of people here waiting for you!!!!
Ich muss ehrlich sagen das ich den Hut ziehen vor den drei Geschichten die in eine Geschichte führt. Ah Chun: Aufstieg in den Himmel, Full Dive: Ewige Phantasie und Phantasia: Der Prinzessin Knight sind als Einzel Geschichten schon sau gut doch wenn man den waren Welt Hintergrund sieht man was für eine Arbeit dahinter steckt. Ich hoffe auf weitere Kapital um zu sehen wie es weiter geht. Danke an den Autor für die Geschichten.
I really like the writing and also how well the story is going forward The romance is pretty well done and while I don't like having the mc rely on ml like has happened it is a rarity. If there's something which I personally would've liked to change with this story is that although dao comes in there's no real in depth into it and it comes in late in the story and not explained very well at all I'd like to see dao used properly like her space dao is basically non existent even if it's lvl 2 and only her sword dao is consistently used
