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fun fact, it is easier to detect carbon dioxide than oxygen. so your body doesn't check that you are breathing in oxygen it checks that you are breathing out more co2 than you breath in. so in this instance he wouldn't even notice there was no oxygen to breath until he became light headed from lack of oxygen.
I think the author meant square miles, cause 1 square mile has 27.9 million square feet in it.
that isn't accurate. that one person beat five people, but most of them also beat people too. most likely each person is fighting someone with an equal number of wins as they have. which means by the end of the fifth round 31 people are defeated for every one person that passes.
flag? definitely a flag.
loving the story, but a quick criticism, or maybe just a bit of confusion. Kat complained about the weight of three (albeit large) books, when her strength is jn the mid 30s. considering the average adult is a 10, and i would assume a real world body builder an 18, it seems odd that she would even notice the weight when at this point she could probably benchpress a horse. it is a consistent inconsistency that confuses me.
not a big thing, but you stated the Sultana and empress wanted to attend, not just their kids.
from things you have said earlier, it seems like this whole Feng/Bing/Meng/Lian bit wasn't supposed to be such a large part of the story and then Bing changed your mind during the tournament. I just want you to know I am here for all of this! Loving the interactions and so glad that took center stage for this arc.