EvilLord04
Ohh... This is a shameless review for my own novel to promote its rating. But since i am posting it, I guess I should tell something about the story. Mc is what you might call a normal person on earth, just a normal person with strong sexual desires. He is smart enough to plan around and manipulate things and someone to be on his favour...
This is a good novel. The only reason I don't like this is that he treats his women like playthings, something I'm not into. If he actually cared about them sure wouldn't mind as much but this dude is like scum, and if you are a white knight that fights against anything that society deems morally wrong at the time, don't read this. If you are not a saint and don't mind dark themes such as this and kinda like realism but still have some morals like me, don't read this. If you are also scum like the MC, don't read this, you would probably get frustrated and jealous of the MC and go on a psychotic murder spree. While I am biased as ****, don't read this in general as I really don't want ****ed up **** like this in our society, Its a good novel with a good story with some inconsistencies, if only the author would change the MC personality then this would be one of my favorites.
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Writing quality is average at best, the biggest attraction of this story is the mindless harem. So dxd, and mc has evil piece that make any female character fall in love with mc making any build up literally mundane and making this story frankly, disgusting when you consider the idea of bending the mind of other sentient being just for you to have your way with them. The mc is just a pervert, most likely a self-insert from the mc. Especially the part that describes mc life in high school, as if author wishes to be. That part really stuck with me, in a bad way. Story development and world background is pointless to mention as everythign is following canon. Character design is just awful. Characters are just shallowly approached, either submissive towards mc or defiant due to being antagonist and females are of course magically tolerant to all disgusting creepy acts that mc commits. I refuse to believe these socially aware, elite members of society will not be able to sense it when someone leers at them lustfully, especially when mc does not even bother to hide it and even sexually harass them. The mc is just... the cliche edgy lustful and somehow "charismatic" character that every neckbeards and weebs aspire to be. I seen some fanfic that is good even with harem or no harem. Sadly this is not one of them
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I'm sorry but I don't really like novel. The MC in the beginning was okay. But it seemed like now Vali's grandfather is a angel to him. I'm stopping reading this novel. I hope that you don't take this hard. It was a interesting plot until he went power hungry. Between him forcefully taking over and crimson Satan fight.
Pretty shallow story, that has almost nothing going for it. It's a pretty mindless Harem story with mediocre r18 scenes. To me its not really readable but your milage may wary. It mostly follow cannon events with a few jabs here and there. Nothing new atleast from what I've read. The English is okay. Plenty readable, but still quite a few errors The story is currently dropped so updates who knows The world is dxd so you know what you get Characters are pretty shit. They have paper cutout personalities. The Mc is usually over compensating the kind that act like an alpha to protect his fragile ego. But in reality he is just an insect. He lacks any subtlety what so ever
well good concept and start but it becomes worse in every chapter π. Mc acts like a psychopath and does worst things to his loved oneπππππππππππ not recommended to those who don't like story like this. This has NTR so ....... Writing Quality : ββββ Updating Stability : ββ Story Development : β Character Design : β world background : ββββ