Reviews of The Eight Sin The Sin Of Love
The Eight Sin The Sin Of Love
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NO HAREM PLEEEASE THE STORY WILL BE BETTER WITHOUT IT JUST ONE OR TWO GIRLS ENOUGH AND DON'T TAKE ANYONE'S GIRL TO GIVE IT TO HIM JUST GIVE HIM A GIRL THAT DOESN'T HAVE ANYONE LIKE JERICO MELASCULA
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I’m gonna be honest here, I know my grammar is bad but dang, you beat me to it. Your lack of comas are uncountable, don’t get me wrong, your English is good it’s just your lack of comas is fcking me over. Another thing that was a turn off for me was Jax character, he’s too emotional for me. I’m not saying he’s bad, he’s actually good it’s just me being weird and like having a calm mc that can’t be triggered easily. As for the story, it’s amazing, there’s only a few of us who writes seven sins ffc so I hope you don’t drop this, and please don’t do harem if you’re not confident on doing it right.
Well the sin of love has no impulsion towards love. The starting was unrealistic.it was written in starting lines that he had 'women'. Then why would he be so naive a some beta wimp here. Also people just all shouting no harem or no stealing and all. Idk *sigh* this is a fanfic not original so how the hell would writer give it intreasting elements. No creativity used and idk with such a big change how timeline doesnt change. I mean no events should not be same. Well dropping tis at 30+chaps because i feel like wasting time. Sin of love... Lol do you think we are idiot and take all **** u throw at us. There was no single point apart forced plot where he a ted upon his sin.
In the first part, it was great but the more the author deviate from the story the more it became boring or just plain senseless. Why? Because this is a fanfic. The author likes to deviate from the main storyline, I get it. You want to expand the story than what was shown on the manga. Great. But when you use the main characters just to compare power levels and make them the king kai of dragonball or rock lee of naruto it just raises a very big question "Why make a fanfic of an anime if you'll just use them as background characters that are useless as dirt?" You make him Meliodas's nephew just to justify him to be a half demon in order to be related to the main characters just to brush over his relation to them as very close to the point that the main characters thought him their knowledge which he doesn't use then give him a totally made up teacher which came out of nowhere, to impart him knowledge and training that is totally useless because he only uses powers he got from the system. The way the story goes, you can erase the main characters and replace them with normal knights and you still have your story. Why do you even make a fanfic if you can write your own?
IS there going to be a harem Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
