You want good time, i give good time to you, Big Boy! Me love you long time you sexy man. Me want you all time long Big Boy! me f*ck u good time. sucky sucky five dowa!
dam the author is a pedo confirmed.
he loves to be probed
lol guy loves his sister so now he's a sis con
She's like oh, no mom any more? I did not know she was even gone to begin with. I thought it was just another normal day.
Even if they read this simps are gonna simp, its what they do.
To be honest with you i have no idea. I made this comment mainly to piss off the people that shit on novels and give them 1 star reviews with out even reading it. Just because it has something in it that they don't like. But i think it does turn in to a harem story later on at least that's what novel updates says.
she was a cold person so she was more rude then anything.
ah shit! hes going to give them a golden shower!
that's a hard pass unless i will be OP
"You can't tell me what to do! you're not my real dad!"
Man this sucks! This was literally the only novel on this site that i would look forward to every week. Now that it's completed what am i going to do? i feel empty inside, author please right another story. It can be an original, maybe a modern one where he advances earths tech and rules the world and then goes out on to space to rule the universe, I don't know. But please don't take long to make another story. I will be eagerly awaiting your return.
I think the Battle power is the one think that's stopping this from being a better novel, since its all over the place. He says its a different version of Bp and its not the same as the DBZ Bp. But why? why not just use the Bp that every one knows. And i think Bp is different for different races, or in other planets. Making it even more confusing. Since when he goes to the One piece planet every ones Bp is low and Author said that there Bp is more of a stamina container they can draw from but he still calls it battle power. So...super fuking confusing.
so the earth is stronger to be able to hold so many strong people? makes sense. But Are you saying that a high class devil which is under that 100k can also destroy other planets? or an ultimate class devil since when he hit 100k he mentions if he could go toe to toe with an ultimate class devil. But If they can it still does not make sense since i don't remember ultimate class devils being able to blow up planets with there strength. Unless you buffed them some how.
So the Mc dies young, he was 16-17 years old. God tells him it was his time to die and was not killed by mistake by god, but god reads his mind and thought the anime worlds were cool so he decided to put them all together in this massive universe filled with strong beings, then sent the Mc to that world after giving him a system and allowing him to pick his race. He of course, picked to be born as a Saiyin. It starts of relatively okay, he was born on earth. He has a mom and a dad. His saiyin mom is actually his mom from the Mc's past life that died and was reborn in to the multiverse. There's a huge time skip till he is 17 years old with a battle power of 25,000. The first people he interacts in this world are the people from HDxD. There are people that spy on him and Mc has no fucking clue which did annoy me. The author does kill off his mother, probably to motivate the MC for what ever reason even though he's a reincarnated person with a second chance that is also a saiyin that love to fight and get stronger. So i don't know why he would need something to motivate him to get stronger. He does bringer her back to life using the Dragon balls. So a great way to make him waste a wish by killing off his mother and forcing him to wish her back. But it was a Bs chapter because it felt super forced to have the Mc witness his mothers death. Felt like those super cliche scenes in movies when the kids witnesses one of there parents death. He's gonna fu*king turn in to batman now. But hey nothing really changes when it comes to him being a real saiyin. Since he does get married, But only uses her as a way to get his dik wet. Then he runs off to train only to do it all over again. So the universe and earth are filled with tons of strong people from different anime's. Even though some of them don't make sense why they are there since there world are in different timelines then a modern earth, one of them being Naruto. Like it would make sense if the author made it so that only some of the anime characters from the Naruto world came over. And he had the Hidden Villages be some sort of secret organization of ninjas, since it would fit more then bringing everyone in the Naruto world in, but he does not. The Naruto world is not small at all. So i don't know how you can keep there same plot going in the modern world. For gods sake, Narutos village is only 3 hours away from Kuoh Town. I have no idea how it's still hidden with so many strong people around. But as you read you end up realizing that it was sort of a forced placement by the author since he wanted to use narutos clone jutsu. Now If you are coming in to this novel expecting the Battle power to be the same as the DBZ universe, don't. You will only become confused and annoyed by trying to wonder why someone low ranking devil from the dxd world has a high amount of Bp. I don't know why the author decided to change the Bp. I wish he would have used the DBZ Bp as a base to show how strong people are, but instead he changes the Bp to be something that's super fking confusing to understand because it seems to change depending on the race. It's like going to math class after studding for along time thinking you know all the answers. But you get a 0 because the teacher decided that 2+2 does not =4 anymore, and he made it so 2+2 now =222. So don't read while using common sense cuz you will have a bad time. I think every race has a different Bp? other then Saiyins, since it seems like his Bp is similar to the DBZ anime. I'm telling you this Battle power **** is allover the place in this story. For example The Mc helps Naruto when the war happens and he helps take out Madara. At the time the Mc has about 3.4mill Bp, when Madara has about 3Mill. And at the same time I believe Naruto is around the same or close to the same as Madara. Since Neji used his byakugan to see The Mc's strength, and mentions that he gives off the same filling Naruto gives off power wise. So don't know how even Madara or Naruto are still close to his strength but whatever. I tried to stop thinking about the Bp or even his stats and how his % on his saiyin blood line worked cuz it would make my head hurt thinking about it. After the war ends and he helps defeat trihexa he goes to the One piece world, that's in a different planet on another galaxy. As soon as this arc starts The story takes an even more boring path. I was already struggling to read the story before this, but now it was a no go so i skimmed threw it. He arrived in the one piece world 8 years before the cannon started he ends up getting another wife, mean while his other wife back on earth has spent 8 years thinking her loved one is dead, and so do his friends. But in reality he is having a good time banging some other girl he made his wife. This novel has allot of issues, but even so i was enjoying it when i turned by brain off and just mindlessly read. Till the one piece part cuz he decided to just crew up with the straw hat gang and follow the cannon. Mean while his wife back on earth still thinks he's dead.