webnovel
avatar

Reviews of The Overlord - Naruto Fanfiction (COMPLETED)

altalt

The Overlord - Naruto Fanfiction (COMPLETED)

ElionAVL

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

Reviews33

LikedNewest
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5BreezyNovels

OP MC = Check Cool Crap= Check Above Average storybuilding while some stuff remains canon = Check. Would recommend i love this fanfic. Its above average quality at the least. My opinion though. Check it out for yourself.

I'm waiting for you on the app's discussion channel!

Download the app to discuss your favorite works, TV shows, and even the weather with me!

avatar
ElionAVL
ElionAVLAuthorElionAVL

There's a minimum of 7 chapters weekly in this novel. It's about a very op mc, who has practically any ability he wants to have, and a companion, named Kurai, a powerful tailed beast, stronger than Juubi, estimated to have 13 Tails, but is not his limit.

G0DLess
G0DLessLv6G0DLess

Seems like a very interesting fiction. Mc is basically god and can do what ever he wants. If you like OP mc this could be for you. I’ve only read to chapter 7, but i’m Liking it already. I just hope he doesn’t get nerfed or put some stupid restrictions on himself just because he doesn’t want to stand out to much.

Atryx10
Atryx10Lv13Atryx10

I have genuinely no fucking clue what the goals of the MC are, nor what's going on. Even if I had any clue about what's going on, it's somewhat of an average story.

YesorNo
YesorNoLv5YesorNo

Writing quality and update stability are good= 4 stars. The story is basically whatever popped into the author's mind on that day... seems unplanned and with no underlying themes. = 2 stars. Character design= Very poor. Not only does the guy have infinite power he has zero motivation. He might as well not exist. Being OP itself is not the problem... interesting OP characters need some trait that makes them relatable, substituting the loss of ******* due to the reader knowing that nothing threatens them. But this guy is bland as ****. = 1 star World background = 4 stars... Naruto fanfic so the world has been directly lifted from it without much modification... the shinto pantheon is mentioned which is rare... good job but could be better.

JManM
JManMLv5JManM

I didn't read too far into the story, but from the chapter titles ahead of where I left off there was little likelyhood of the situation changing from the boring state it was in. The MC is infinitely powerful and completely apathetic about what is going on. If he doesn't care why would the audience?

wanderer_of_novels
wanderer_of_novelsLv6wanderer_of_novels

this story is absolute garbage. the authour can't write for ****. there's zero character or story development. that world building is non existent,

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

Other than the fact that M.C is a bit too overpowered, everything else about this novel is perfect. Keep up the good work. I think that it would be interesting if M.C travel to other worlds like seven deadly sins or some cultivation world so that M.C would at least face some challenges. Something like god of slaughter or heck.. even great demon king. I shall seal the heaven would be nice as well.

TheTrollMaster
TheTrollMasterLv4TheTrollMaster

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! AND DONT FORGET THAT FUUUUU AND ALSO INCEST ISSSSSSSS WIIIIINCEEEST DINT FORGET THE BIG SISTA

hellenator
hellenatorLv5hellenator

Really liking the story so far, I think it's really high quality as well, I'd like to see some romance, interested in how a 1000 year old virgin would do,,😂😂

OFFLINE23
OFFLINE23Lv5OFFLINE23

More chapters please!!! Please don’t drop it like the other authors! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More chapters please!!! Please don’t drop it like the other authors!

ChosenEternally
ChosenEternallyLv12ChosenEternally

THIS IS INTERESTING KEEP UP THE WORK NOW TO BYPASS THE 140 CHARACTER AFFANOFIAHDIJAPIDJPAIWJDPIAWJDPAIWDJPWIAJ APIADPOAWDPADJAAWDAWDADAWDAWDAWDAWFEFV

WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11WN_grdy_mthr_fker

Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter.. also i am loving the speed of chapters being released

hiddenwolf
hiddenwolfLv5hiddenwolf

cool story, i don't have anything to said expect that this fan-fin is awesome..........................................worth it, read IT>>>>>>>>>>>>>!!!!!!!

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. .................................................................................😎

jun341992
jun341992Lv5jun341992

It was a great novel keep up the good work. Thank you😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

goldzi
goldziLv5goldzi

..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

BlueBee
BlueBeeLv13BlueBee

Reveal spoiler

Lovelynovels
LovelynovelsLv5Lovelynovels

Good story phone so í wont write much jberény június hgoy hgoy hgoy hgoy hgoy fgvfhvf ijedt killing külföldi huhjgghugzhhghiuhuhuigt h chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter

WhiteGhost
WhiteGhostLv5WhiteGhost

GoodwisiisjsjsjsjjsjsjsjsjsjshjsnsnsnssjjsjsjsnsbsbsbsbsbsbsbbsbsbshshshshshshshshshshsGfffdddddffghfetygdeygdssdrguisiskisksksksjsisisussjjsjsjsjssjjsjsjs