Review Detail of Atryx10 in The Overlord - Naruto Fanfiction (COMPLETED)
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I have genuinely no fucking clue what the goals of the MC are, nor what's going on. Even if I had any clue about what's going on, it's somewhat of an average story.
The Overlord - Naruto Fanfiction (COMPLETED)
ElionAVL
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Lets start making goals. How about the evil route? Add some spice, have him assist black zetsu and have everyone stop our boy.
ElionAVL:You kind of have a point I guess. XD
Please re-read description. I also have fully explained that mc is doing this because he is bored, and Black Zetsu will play his part in this novel, it's just that it's still early. There are like 3-5 volumes.
Morning_Fragrance:Lets start making goals. How about the evil route? Add some spice, have him assist black zetsu and have everyone stop our boy.
The main reason I'm confused is because the description makes it seem like it's about somethong else, like the mc being reincarnated or something similar. Good luck with the continued writing though. Just because I don't get it doesn't mean it won't be entertaining for lots of others.
ElionAVL:But I do have a reason for mc being there, just not explain until much later.
He is not reincarnated, although he was not in the world for much of the 1k years, because he just left a soul clone there, and went to explore the universe.
Atryx10:The main reason I'm confused is because the description makes it seem like it's about somethong else, like the mc being reincarnated or something similar. Good luck with the continued writing though. Just because I don't get it doesn't mean it won't be entertaining for lots of others.
ElionAVL:He is not reincarnated, although he was not in the world for much of the 1k years, because he just left a soul clone there, and went to explore the universe.