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YesorNo
YesorNoLv55yrYesorNo

Writing quality and update stability are good= 4 stars. The story is basically whatever popped into the author's mind on that day... seems unplanned and with no underlying themes. = 2 stars. Character design= Very poor. Not only does the guy have infinite power he has zero motivation. He might as well not exist. Being OP itself is not the problem... interesting OP characters need some trait that makes them relatable, substituting the loss of ******* due to the reader knowing that nothing threatens them. But this guy is bland as ****. = 1 star World background = 4 stars... Naruto fanfic so the world has been directly lifted from it without much modification... the shinto pantheon is mentioned which is rare... good job but could be better.

The Overlord - Naruto Fanfiction (COMPLETED)

ElionAVL

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YesorNo
YesorNoLv5YesorNo

why is t.ension censored??? wtf

ElionAVL
ElionAVLAuthorElionAVL

I Don't know, and yeah you guessed right! I'm a totally lazy dude, who hasn't watched Naruto in years, who just came out with this idea out of the blue!

YesorNo:why is t.ension censored??? wtf
FinzRaizer
FinzRaizerLv11FinzRaizer

well yeah i really lazy to rewatch more than 400 episode , prefer watch new update XD

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4_EMI_

I didn't even watch shippunden the second time, while writing my novel because of so many fillers. Manga is the way to go.

ElionAVL:I Don't know, and yeah you guessed right! I'm a totally lazy dude, who hasn't watched Naruto in years, who just came out with this idea out of the blue!
CastroGastro
CastroGastroLv3CastroGastro

you dont really need to watch all episodes, ya just need to brush up on naruto canon by quick google search

ElionAVL:I Don't know, and yeah you guessed right! I'm a totally lazy dude, who hasn't watched Naruto in years, who just came out with this idea out of the blue!