honestly i'm going to stop here, thanks for the story so far, but it's kinda annoying to read a story where a supposedly prepared and powerful mc keeps getting the short end of the stick. It feels like no matter what he does it just does not matter. he might win a small fight here or there, but in the end it's simply useless if he loses every big fight that matters

A really good fic, already read it on ff, and i can hardly wait for updates. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................

This is really good. no problem with grammar, the story pulls you in, and the MC is very interesting, can hardly wait for next update.....................

This is really good. The writing quality is among the best on this site. The world pulls you in. The only problem I have is the repeated nerfs the MC goes through. At this point there have been at least 3 (The last one also goes against a what the author said when introducing the power). The first is an overall nerf to the star wars power system. There are records of force powers on the scale of planets, and even among the more normal ones smasshing a few spaceships and buildings isn't too hard. Our MC might be able to lift a tree or too. Also jedi need a student-master bond to progress in force or they are just fucked(MC does not have a master). The second was when it was just straight up claimed that the MC can't use the force for basically anything. Want to stop a war, well ok, but cut yourself off from the force first. want to fight someone, just don't use the force, otherwise bad things happen. The third not really a nerf, but kinda weird still. MC is speed focused, and so far everyone can match his speed. Everyone hits harder, lasts longer so on. This is with the MC having pulled the most powerful starter kit from all the reincarnators, and somehow still can 't keep up with others. The fourth is the most recent chapter(51 i think), where the ability he spends most of his time perfecting, splitting his mind into parallel processes, suddenly has a stacking fatigue drawback, which was specifically stated in the beginning that it doesn't. So all in all a really good story, just stop nerfing the MC, he is already on of the weakest people we have met so far, while having multiple advantages, and having trained the hardest and longest(both stated in story).

pretty sure it was said earlier that the main advantage of multiple wills is that there is no stacking fatigue. Like when the ability was introduced. So another nerf. at this rate he would be stronger if he just rolled a 5 and gone any other route.

I mean it honestly doesn´t really matter if you kill him. he is a non-entity at this point, so weak he can´t fight back even if he wanted to.

Okay, so the story is about 4 stars actually, but I´m giving it 5 to counteract the bullshit 1stars. The writing quality is good, easily readable and the story is interesting. Pulling the MCU in will probably make it difficult, but that´s far down the line. The character is smart but still human, not one of those sociopathic MC-s. The power levels are a bit all over the place, but it´s still really early in the story so it might be that the MC just doesn´t know enough yet. All in all an interesting story, with challenges ahead, but far from ruined like other reviews say.

really hope yugito survives, always liked her

still thanks for trying

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Why does he need favours to take serafalls guard? if can not take it then serafall is not invited to come, simple as that...

This is actually ridiculously good. Very deep character and world design. It might be a fanfic, but the world is almost entirely the author's own. Expalnations to make things seem logical, deatiled setup for everything without being boring. It surpasses most professionally translated works and originals on the site. This together with the nice length of mostly regular updates leaves me looking forward to new chapters all the time.

So much potential in it, but it's basically unreadable. every chapter his stregth changes, the name of the powerlevels kééps getting mixed up. Since he is using a system at least the numbers should be consistant, but one chapter he has a 1000 devine snakes, next it's only 300. one chapter he is able to defeat high gods (level 7+) next he levels up and his far more powerful combatpower is at the max level 6. The character is constantly getting nerfed, the powerlevels are all over the place, the originstory of the world literally goes from descendant of the most powerful to an unstable wondering civ. really liked the idea, but the actual story is unbearable.

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Thanks for the chapter :D Is there a pic of Carina anywhere?

I like the idea, kind of hard to judge how it will go, but I would like to read more. Hoping this gets picked...........................................

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cynthia

thanks for the chapter :D