The grammar is a little rough, but gets better during the story. Really awesome world setup, and nice character development. looking forward for more

grammar is better than the beginning, and the stry is fascinating

thx for the chap :D

So far interesting and original, nice grammar and structure. The character has a unique feeling to him. The pace is good, but really waiting for more.

Really good work, and don't listen to idiots

This is seriously good. Excellent quality writing, interesting characters, and a living wotld. World keeper was one of my favorite novels, and this brings a similar feeling. Looking forward for more.

Next ARC, yaaaay. Really enjoying the book :D

1 and 3

noce finish, thx for the chaps :D

is this uploaded anywhere else? with all the click here links that work?

Really like the story so far, interesting, little fast paced, but overall really well writtenReally like the story so far, interesting, little fast paced, but overall really well writtenReally like the story so far, interesting, little fast paced, but overall really well writtenReally like the story so far, interesting, little fast paced, but overall really well writtenReally like the story so far, interesting, little fast paced, but overall really well written

So far a really good story, waiting for updates, keep it up :DSo far a really good story, waiting for updates, keep it up :DSo far a really good story, waiting for updates, keep it up :DSo far a really good story, waiting for updates, keep it up :DSo far a really good story, waiting for updates, keep it up :DSo far a really good story, waiting for updates, keep it up :D

nice story, still a little short, but lots of potential

nice so far, but for some reason it isn't showing up on your profile page for me

i like the story so far

just found the book, thx for the awesome content

Still one of the best novels on the site, thanks for the entertainment :D

awesome story so far in the last two line isn't is supposed to be 1 hour ingame = .5 hours in real life?