Review Detail of BlueBee in The Overlord - Naruto Fanfiction (COMPLETED)

Okay this is going to be rather long but first of all: This story is awesome thank you for writing it Void-san <3 I really loved the concept of the third Otsutsuki brother, it was something new and interesting and it even included a semi-reincarnation that i have a total craze for :)) the writing is superb and although there were some typos here and there, it didn't disturb the flow of the story or confuse me. The updates were plenty, mostly one or two chapters a day and i was always excited for the next chappie when the dreaded cliffhangers showed up but was never disapointed! xD The plot holes were very few which was awesome tbh! The world background and 'history' of the story was very structured and made the story very balanced overall. Though there were some loose ends to the story like the underground empire he build, the abysal pheonix or even the part in which Minato wanted to confront him about his powers and if there was somthing bothering him. But don't get me wrong the story itself was/is awesome! As for the characters themselves in story: they were well developed each and everyone had their clear role to fulfill and their development/improvement was steady and logical. Although the MC Ryu Otsutsuki/ Uzumaki Namikaze was really a plus thousand year old God Void-san made him into an awkwarrdly lovable character and it was really amusing to read the way our MC interacted with the other characters around him, such as his Team and his Family, although sparse it showed the love they shared and they influenced him. Last but not least, i want to thank all my lucky stars that this was NOT a harem, sorry to all the harem lovers out there, but i was THRILLED to know that and loved the story a hundred times more after finding that out. Especially with the way his love story with cute Fuu was portrait! It made you completely forget that this guy an old wise god but cute little boy experiencing the world of love for the first time! CUTE!!! All in all, although the ending was rushed and unexpected i have to say that this is one of the best fan-fiction stories out there! i really this story as a whole and would recommend it to anyone!! <3 <3