Reviews of Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey

Fallingsword,I admit i that I don't know how to write a good review because of my lack in English language but I really like your fanfic even though it just 6 chapter so far.....keep writing and good luck.

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I'm really enjoying it and it's a nice HP Fanfic. Please continue it and don't drop it. A lot of Authors tend to leave their stories unfinished... I want to follow this until the end! Keep going!

I always loved HP and yours is a nice story. It's fun and helps pass the time. :) Please don't drop it! Keep it going until the end! I like it.

Just dont let dumbledore manipulate harry, You are doing great! Keep up the good work. Missed a good HP novel out there, here it is😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The review is just my opinion... The author is following the future knowledge of movie/original book/Canon storyline which has less variety of details and it will be boring 😴😴😴 and should consider other HP fanfics in fanfiction.net or other HP world fanfics for more diverse world building... Eg. the muggle born should visit for St mungos for various vaccination and political power also plays a major role like potter family's heir ring or something and many more possibilities... The Mc should analyse the future and major problems and take necessary counters eg daily prophets Rita& MoM (ministry), helping sirius black.... The author should consider the Canon knowledge like guidelines and should not be afraid to change things... And plan for the worst case scenario.... This is a fanfics so the author can bring his own element of surprise/scenarios.... 😉 As far as ch 13 the story is good and even if it's the Canon storyline the fanfics is interesting and waiting for more chapters😊😊😊 My personal opinion I hate Ron's friendship.. So please deport him into another universe 😒😒😒

Hogwarts, Hogwarts, Hoggy Warty Hogwarts, Teach us something please, Whether we be old and bald Or young with scabby knees, Our heads could do with filling With some interesting stuff, For now they’re bare and full of air, Dead flies and bits of fluff, So teach us things worth knowing, Bring back what we’ve forgot, Just do your best, we’ll do the rest, And learn until our brains all rot.

Never reviewed before but I love how you are going more in depth in how the magic system works compared to the books. Thank you and please don't drop this

Really liked the way the story is going forward and with the advantage of his knowledge of the story, can't wait to see what changes he brings to the original plot. Also please just like the some reincarnated LNs he doesn't say that he is reincarnated and all past life ****-talks even to the people he trust most. It really removes all the mysterious feeling around the MC and the plot goes tasteless. Also whats your updating plan , need MORE. Anyways nice work keep it up.

Keep up the good work author san! Wishing you finish this story! Hope you don't burn out your passion for this one! Goodluck and keep healthy!

I enjoy it so far ( considering its only 6 chapters at the moment), but please rethink number 6 on his formula of future goals. Don't get me wrong, seeing him with her would be more interesting then canon, just please, make it more natural instead of forced and maybe don't turn him into just ANOTHER horny character from a typical cliched fan fiction doing everything possible to get the girl. Sorry if this sounds too critical or anything, it just happens SO many times in sSO many fan fictions where the reincarnated guy DESPERATELY wants THE girl, or, multiple girls in-fact, that the story goes downhill fast for me. Keep writing and I'll keep reading mate :) Good luck

Harry won't end up with Hermione because he feels fate is doing something about it and is just ok with it. The reason I spent the stones is because of the promise of HxH. Now your telling me that it won't happen? Save your time. 8/10 ch.1-28 0/10 ch. 29- onwars

I actually really like this story. Good job on it. I'm wondering if it will be the Golden Trio or if Harry is going to branch out and be friends with other people. Anyways looking forward to the next chapter.

love it!!!!! a lot . keep regular updates and ,i would like if snape support harry potter more in dark arts , and harry should train his friend to level up there magic and have speciality of there own ,

I have only one problem and it is update, the update is way slow ,5 days since last update I guess . As far as story is concerned,it is great , just want Harry to be little mature when it comes to girls lol , hehe won't mind a few *** scenes with one or more girls .hehe

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One of the best original novels i have read till now. Kudos to the author 😁. Please release around 10 chapters per week. Can't wait to read more....

The best Harry Potter fan-fiction i have ever read, Its Addictive!!! Love the story, unique take on Harry Potter and the magic as well. I hope you continue and don't drop it as many author leave their stories unfinished. LOVE THE NOVEL!!! DON'T DROP IT!!!!!

This is a fabulous novel. I honestly think this is the best fan-fic, I have ever read. I recommend this novel bc it had very little mistakes and has a good release rate. The only thing I would say to the author is that the immersion is broken sometimes. For example, I was quite surprised to see Minerva curse. I don't think she was that type of person in the main books. There are examples like this with all the characters so far. They seem to behave in a way that is completely out of expectations. I can understand if this is where you wish to be different from the original story but it is kind of weird. I also wish mc was more low-key. So far he is going into Hogwarts guns blazing and alerting everyone. It seems he would be under the radar of Voldemort and attract unwanted attention. He is still pretty weak. I do have a request to the author. I hope you will focus more on magical creatures than J.K Rowling. The book was a fantasy book but she rarely talked about magical creatures. The only time dragons showed up was during a small part of a tournament. That is crazy bc dragons are always seen as top-tier beasts in fantasy books. It feels like she focused on the "Humans" of the wizarding world and forgot to expand on the genre. So I hope you can put a bit more fantasy in your harry potter novel. Thanks for writing the novel.

He has the knowledge about the future of this world Or does he? I don't know , you're the author not me dude.