Review Detail of egis3 in Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey
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The review is just my opinion... The author is following the future knowledge of movie/original book/Canon storyline which has less variety of details and it will be boring 😴😴😴 and should consider other HP fanfics in fanfiction.net or other HP world fanfics for more diverse world building... Eg. the muggle born should visit for St mungos for various vaccination and political power also plays a major role like potter family's heir ring or something and many more possibilities... The Mc should analyse the future and major problems and take necessary counters eg daily prophets Rita& MoM (ministry), helping sirius black.... The author should consider the Canon knowledge like guidelines and should not be afraid to change things... And plan for the worst case scenario.... This is a fanfics so the author can bring his own element of surprise/scenarios.... 😉 As far as ch 13 the story is good and even if it's the Canon storyline the fanfics is interesting and waiting for more chapters😊😊😊 My personal opinion I hate Ron's friendship.. So please deport him into another universe 😒😒😒
Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey
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Thanks for the suggestions Regis93. I never planned to follow the canon timeline. The beginning will have to follow it due to plot construction but then as the story matures, it will deviate from the canon. And I will make sure to do something about Ron. Even I don't like the way he was shown in the books and the movies.
Ron is a piece of ****.... he almost ruined the story with his fucking jealousy, instead of striving to improve.
fallingsword:Thanks for the suggestions Regis93. I never planned to follow the canon timeline. The beginning will have to follow it due to plot construction but then as the story matures, it will deviate from the canon. And I will make sure to do something about Ron. Even I don't like the way he was shown in the books and the movies.
Please dont wrote like ron in HP and The Secret Treasures. Please add ur own element of twist. One of the MOST intriguing HP fanfic until now
fallingsword:Thanks for the suggestions Regis93. I never planned to follow the canon timeline. The beginning will have to follow it due to plot construction but then as the story matures, it will deviate from the canon. And I will make sure to do something about Ron. Even I don't like the way he was shown in the books and the movies.
fallingsword:Thanks for the suggestions Regis93. I never planned to follow the canon timeline. The beginning will have to follow it due to plot construction but then as the story matures, it will deviate from the canon. And I will make sure to do something about Ron. Even I don't like the way he was shown in the books and the movies.
Will there be harem. If so i want ginny and hermione . if not harem will there be romance? Ill probably find out when i read but i thought id ask before reading
fallingsword:Thanks for the suggestions Regis93. I never planned to follow the canon timeline. The beginning will have to follow it due to plot construction but then as the story matures, it will deviate from the canon. And I will make sure to do something about Ron. Even I don't like the way he was shown in the books and the movies.