Review Detail of Red_Tempest in Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey

This is a fabulous novel. I honestly think this is the best fan-fic, I have ever read. I recommend this novel bc it had very little mistakes and has a good release rate. The only thing I would say to the author is that the immersion is broken sometimes. For example, I was quite surprised to see Minerva curse. I don't think she was that type of person in the main books. There are examples like this with all the characters so far. They seem to behave in a way that is completely out of expectations. I can understand if this is where you wish to be different from the original story but it is kind of weird. I also wish mc was more low-key. So far he is going into Hogwarts guns blazing and alerting everyone. It seems he would be under the radar of Voldemort and attract unwanted attention. He is still pretty weak. I do have a request to the author. I hope you will focus more on magical creatures than J.K Rowling. The book was a fantasy book but she rarely talked about magical creatures. The only time dragons showed up was during a small part of a tournament. That is crazy bc dragons are always seen as top-tier beasts in fantasy books. It feels like she focused on the "Humans" of the wizarding world and forgot to expand on the genre. So I hope you can put a bit more fantasy in your harry potter novel. Thanks for writing the novel.