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Deepsea

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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea14h
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    I get you coach. I think most of us have a sweet spot for our parents and it scares us when we realize that they are also humans, they get sick, get old and make mistakes. Hope you feel better now!

    Ch 712 V2 ch184
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    The Hitting Zone
    Competitive Sports · half_empty
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea1d
    Replied to I_Am_Noice

    Stapling his wound is better than duct tape..... since removal of duct tape on said wound could cause reopening of the wound

    I gave him the first aid and duct taped his wound shut temporarily and carried him back to my car.
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    Ultimate player
    Movies · I_Am_Noice
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea8d
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    Emcee?

    The MC said as he gestured toward Tsunayoshi to come up on stage.
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    Am I Genius Too? (KnB Fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Mythos
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea10d
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    I really tried to read through the grammar... but will it get better?

    Well let's talk about the changes God has spoken about well that is my Enkidu can target multiple people but it will quite practice to get used it and also find an interesting thing which I should not supposed to have it hahahahaha
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    Gilgamesh in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Believers
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea10d
    Replied to Shadeos

    Author san what are the changes that happened? I think There Has been an overhaul of the previous chapters?

    Ch 25 College of Art
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    Pokemon: Wanderlust
    Anime & Comics · Shadeos
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea10d
    Replied to IAmDragon

    They changed and i think he got 4 Pokemons now

    Ch 25 College of Art
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    Pokemon: Wanderlust
    Anime & Comics · Shadeos
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea13d
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    Ch 140 Ch. 140 After another task
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    Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
    Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea13d
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    Congrats on the chapter!

    Ch 285 Unexpectedly (5)
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    God of Cooking
    Magical Realism · 양치기자리
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea15d
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    Reincarnation*

    Truck-kun, Renicarnation
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    Gilgamesh in MHA
    Anime & Comics · Believers
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea18d
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    Dude what’s with the run on sentence? Someone chasing you?

    A whole year has passed since I saved the golden-horned deer, Elaphoi Khrysokeroi, which is a name that I cannot pronounce so I will call him the golden-horned deer, although Artemis did not fulfill my desire from her, except that I am not angry, it would be a shame for someone like me to behave in a Childish manner, nor did I expect that she would immediately give me her divine energy.
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    Marvel: A God's Journey.
    others · Zouhair_mankind
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea18d
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    I think you can remove the instead at the start?

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    Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)
    Book&Literature · Memonic
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea23d
    Commented

    Hi pancreas cancer is usually termed as pancreatic cancer

    Ch -1 Help and Support
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    Hollywood RE:CODED
    Realistic Fiction · BukanOrang
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea24d
    Commented

    Antics*?

    So far, they've been very professional apart from these small antiques which have been rather casual.
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    Reaching For the Stars
    Magical Realism · murdsguy
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea25d
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    Prologue is well written and all, my only issue is the amount of names in this chapter. I mean as a new reader, it’s confusing and makes me wanna stop reading, since I don’t know any of them and I’m not that invested in the story. Anyway hope you take this a constructive criticism

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Haikyuu: Center Ace!
    Competitive Sports · mssuigeneris
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea27d
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    ‘Is’ is used when Pertaining to a single subject. In this case you’re talking about 2 subjects, Ryou and Ringo, making your subject plural or more than one; using ‘are’ here is better.

    And they laughing together, they know they will not see each other anymore in highschool since Ryou and Ringo is going to a dormitory.
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    Realistic Fiction · Kazuyagami
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea27d
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    Hi author san! Reading until this chapter, i think your grammar errors are mostly on the subject verb agreement especially with the use of ‘is’ and ‘are’. Hope you don’t take this the wrong way!

    Ch 5 Junior School Days
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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    Realistic Fiction · Kazuyagami
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea28d
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    Please please please don’t do this.... I know how uncomfortable its but please don’t

    I could tell he was excited, but not even nearly as much as I was. 'I'm alive! I'm alive!' I kept repeating to myself in my thoughts. I guess a few minutes passed, still confused on how time passed, and finally my eyes opened. As if it was a rehearsed play, my body began to move. First was my neck, then my core and hips, and after that were my arms and legs. The first thing I did when I could finally move again was taking that damn tube out of my throat. "*cough**cough*"
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    I Will Be Popular After Being In A Coma
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea30d
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    ‘My dream after i die’ is better here if you are talking about what he wants for the afterlife

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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    Realistic Fiction · Kazuyagami
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea30d
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    “..... you are already dead” OR “..... you already died”

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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    Realistic Fiction · Kazuyagami
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  • Deepsea
    Deepsea30d
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    Hi author san is it okay if i start pointing out grammar errors starting now?

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    My Second Life, in The Class Room of The Elite World (MOVED)
    Realistic Fiction · Kazuyagami
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