Stapling his wound is better than duct tape..... since removal of duct tape on said wound could cause reopening of the wound
I really tried to read through the grammar... but will it get better?
Dude what’s with the run on sentence? Someone chasing you?
I think you can remove the instead at the start?
Prologue is well written and all, my only issue is the amount of names in this chapter. I mean as a new reader, it’s confusing and makes me wanna stop reading, since I don’t know any of them and I’m not that invested in the story. Anyway hope you take this a constructive criticism
‘Is’ is used when Pertaining to a single subject. In this case you’re talking about 2 subjects, Ryou and Ringo, making your subject plural or more than one; using ‘are’ here is better.
Please please please don’t do this.... I know how uncomfortable its but please don’t
‘My dream after i die’ is better here if you are talking about what he wants for the afterlife
“..... you are already dead” OR “..... you already died”
Hi author san is it okay if i start pointing out grammar errors starting now?