Reviews of Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army

🤔 sounds interesting, at least synopsis is straight forward............................................................................................... 5-stars for simplicity!

The name included one man army. but it seems 2 parasites already added to story at the level of chapter 30. So change the name into one man two parasite army. if you add more parasite then one man many parasite army.

Well this is stupid but good we'll.... It's more like it's soooooo bad that it's good it doesn't make sense to me but I don't care anymore I will rate this five stars

Dumb luck!!!! I AM IN!!!!! (=) (=) (———-) I am not old……… Lalalalalalalalalalalallallal140lalalalalalalalal140lalaila Did u see the i ¿

the fu*k is wrong with this story?? too many characters i thought it should be one man army? so why does it have so many characters?? chapter 22 and still no improvement on the story.. gonna drop this one!

1 - Terrible grammar. 2 - Presentation of several characters in a short time, takes the reader to not care about the characters. 3 - The title leads us to believe in a story about a lonely b.adass. 4 - The author thinks that filler and construction of personage and the same thing. Maybe the story will improve, but I will not see it.

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EXCUSE MY USE OF CAPS BUT I LIKE THIS SOTRY TOO MUCH TO NOT WANT TO EXPRESS MY EXCITEMENT. FIRST A QUICK SUMMERY OF THE OTHER REVIEWS POINTS SO I DONT REPEAT TOO MUCH WRITING IMPROVES AS TIME GOES ON THIS IS WONDERFULLY HILARIOUS THE PREMIS/GENER OF THE STORY IS IN NO WAY ORIGINAL BUT IS A GREAT ONE NONE THE LESS AND IS IN NO WAY A WAST OF TIME THERE ARE STILL SKME GRAMMER MISTAKES THAT HAVE YET TO BE FIXED UP IN LATER CHAPTERS NOW ON TO WHAT I LOVE THAT IS NOT MENTIONED YET THE AUTHER DOES NOT GIVE MUCH DETAILS OF THE CARACTERS SO WE CAN INVISION WHAT THEY LOOK LIKE OURSELVES TO (he said so himself in one of the comments) THE STORY MAKES OBVIOUS FUN OF THE MC INSAIN LUCK (plot amor) AND ITS GETS A FEW RUNNING JOKES GOING ON TOO HE KEEPS THE STORY FROM GETTING DULL WITH FUN FIGHT SCENES / SHOWING THE DARK SIDE OF THE WORLD (thank you so much for that) / TOSSING IN A BUNCH OF LIFE LESSION LIKE MOMENTS THAT I CAN GLADLY TAKE TO HEART IN MY OWN LIFE irl / AND ABOVE ALL I FUNNY MOMENTS ACTUALLY MADE ME LAUGH AND ROLL AROUND ON MY BED IF YOU DONT BELIVE ME MESSAGE ME AND I WILL TELL YOU OK DISCORD WITH MY OWN VOICE AND TELL YOU AND IF YOU STILL DONT BELIVE ME WELL TO BAD SO SAD to the auther: thank you so much for making this story. It has really raised my mood and pulled me out of a little funk I was getting into. Now I’d like to suggest some things / reiterate some welter suggestions. No mater what keep the story yours legally if you can. Like it was suggested in the comments before, please please please find somebody to make an manga or webcomic of your story. To keep it unique I’d suggest only drawing the features you have mentioned like the gender, hair color, species, etc. to keep the readers image of them entirely up to them. Find somebody skilled in English you can trust to help you with writing your story in more grammatically correct ways and not just for proofreading. And finally please make a patreon if quidan will let you so I can live the meme of shut up and take my money. I hope to be able to follow the journey you make for the caracters till it’s compleation and then on the the next. Thank you.

So 1st off, I will update release stability soon as I get a feel for it as I've only been reading for a day now. Then 2nd this will not be everyone's go too, in terms of writing style or methodology of delivery, however as you read you can see the growth of the author from a more simplistic point to point, to a more enveloped writing style. It is a great read and a fantastic story with just enough humor and "debauchery" added to keep it interesting even if it may seem slow tanked at times. For future chapters I do so hope for a way to further differentiate the sheer growth potential of the 3 student from the remainder of the school, maybe even develop more of the school itself as besides a few instances there is little or nothing to do with the school itself. And long term (yes I hope long term) potentially delve into the dungeon and their ability to grow and adapt there(I do feel like your setting the 3 up as a team further down the line).

The story is slow with %70 percent fillers of useless words, doesn't really strike my interest and he haven't even got to a dungeon once and i'm already at 20+ chapters, the character is all bland and boring although i have read slower stories than this at least it wasn't filled with fillers but character interaction or interesting power up's.

Its a story that will grow on you, the first chapters are not the best writing style but it gets better, its fun, light hearted, and most likely a story you would like to see grow, so read and enjoy, there is something for everyone.

Eu gostei da imagem de capa e da sinopse enquanto procurava alguma novidade, porém o número de capítulos ainda é baixo para meu gosto... Então vou esperar mais um pouco, mais fica aí algumas estrelas cmo apoio...

I didn't read it yet but I accidentally clicked this novel better rate it base on nothing but pure nothingness. Support to you author. Who ever you are I also vote for you. P.S I'm not his dummy account Im just a passing by who like the title and book cover.

Read up to chapter 66 and still find it slow and boring. For the author trying to develop growth and for readers to build a connection with the characters good try but it gets drawn out too long. So far nothing grabbing me to continue reading it.

The story has a weird flow where sometimes there would be 20 lines of dialogue then none for a whole chapter doesn’t make proper sentences not all that much character design almost no real world background. Disclaimer I only read 10 chapters could get much better, Also author even if it is a a fun and lighthearted story it doesn’t mean it should lake the things mentioned above

First off, the author aint human. seriosly, it aint normal to write over 200 chapters in the span of a few months. next, the world is fairly well designed, perhaps a little off on the kingdoms, and how powerful they are. one moment they are super weak, like level 20 is already rather high, and the next moment a level is being sold away like nothing. which is fine, since kingdoms arent really important to the story, but still. world background is good, and everything is satisfactory. characters are well designed, and they all are included in the story, and arent forgotten about, which is really nice to see. spoiler: hells up with kitty apearing out of nowwhere then suddenly getting some rather important role. lile, it was explained later, but still. still a cool character, dont let thia ruin the story for you, please. end spoiler. so anyway, the story is developing well, with a plot in the background you dont notice too much, but is still there. and its really nice to know nothing too tragic can happen to the main character, which is so good. I keep on getting concerned that everything is too peaceful, before remembering who the main character knows. anyway, thanks for writing this story, dont stop writing(take a break someday, okay) and also, fantastic story, and this review was added so that you would continue that mass release every day that convinced me you werent human.

Nice novel, fun characters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All I did was read the caption above and I will gove it 5 stars for the simplist description. (Also that made me laugh already so thanks.)

A beautiful read of luck made skill. Completely free it was a pleasure following the MC through his trials, watching his legend and family grow. While the editing quality left something to be desired with numerous spelling errors throughout none of it was impossible to figure out. My biggest gripe with this book is that for most of the book you are presented a medieval high fantasy vibe, about half way in instead we are instead shown the world is a far future earth with old/fantasy tech sprinkled in. Still if there's more to come after 430, I look forward to seeing the next arc.

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