Review Detail of Huskeylord in Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army
Review detail
EXCUSE MY USE OF CAPS BUT I LIKE THIS SOTRY TOO MUCH TO NOT WANT TO EXPRESS MY EXCITEMENT. FIRST A QUICK SUMMERY OF THE OTHER REVIEWS POINTS SO I DONT REPEAT TOO MUCH WRITING IMPROVES AS TIME GOES ON THIS IS WONDERFULLY HILARIOUS THE PREMIS/GENER OF THE STORY IS IN NO WAY ORIGINAL BUT IS A GREAT ONE NONE THE LESS AND IS IN NO WAY A WAST OF TIME THERE ARE STILL SKME GRAMMER MISTAKES THAT HAVE YET TO BE FIXED UP IN LATER CHAPTERS NOW ON TO WHAT I LOVE THAT IS NOT MENTIONED YET THE AUTHER DOES NOT GIVE MUCH DETAILS OF THE CARACTERS SO WE CAN INVISION WHAT THEY LOOK LIKE OURSELVES TO (he said so himself in one of the comments) THE STORY MAKES OBVIOUS FUN OF THE MC INSAIN LUCK (plot amor) AND ITS GETS A FEW RUNNING JOKES GOING ON TOO HE KEEPS THE STORY FROM GETTING DULL WITH FUN FIGHT SCENES / SHOWING THE DARK SIDE OF THE WORLD (thank you so much for that) / TOSSING IN A BUNCH OF LIFE LESSION LIKE MOMENTS THAT I CAN GLADLY TAKE TO HEART IN MY OWN LIFE irl / AND ABOVE ALL I FUNNY MOMENTS ACTUALLY MADE ME LAUGH AND ROLL AROUND ON MY BED IF YOU DONT BELIVE ME MESSAGE ME AND I WILL TELL YOU OK DISCORD WITH MY OWN VOICE AND TELL YOU AND IF YOU STILL DONT BELIVE ME WELL TO BAD SO SAD to the auther: thank you so much for making this story. It has really raised my mood and pulled me out of a little funk I was getting into. Now I’d like to suggest some things / reiterate some welter suggestions. No mater what keep the story yours legally if you can. Like it was suggested in the comments before, please please please find somebody to make an manga or webcomic of your story. To keep it unique I’d suggest only drawing the features you have mentioned like the gender, hair color, species, etc. to keep the readers image of them entirely up to them. Find somebody skilled in English you can trust to help you with writing your story in more grammatically correct ways and not just for proofreading. And finally please make a patreon if quidan will let you so I can live the meme of shut up and take my money. I hope to be able to follow the journey you make for the caracters till it’s compleation and then on the the next. Thank you.
Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army
yassertlm
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I like the typos man so chill, it means you are writing with passion. As for the review i am so happy that you can have so much fun with my novel. As for the suggestions regarding the grammar and spelling and such, those are taken under consideration and i am looking for the trustees right now, as for the manga or web comics i feel like its not time for so many media outlests, as for patreon or Amazon, i am currently working on both but maybe it will be up by the new year, for legal purposes only, as for making this novel legally protected, i am in contact with webnovel to see what i can do about it.
Glad to hear that your working on the legal stuff especially with how good your story is. I have had some good stories/translations lost because of cruddy legal problems and such so I’m glad your taking care of it. It’s also good to know that the comic/manga idea is not out the window. Hope my review can bring more readers and your reply can ease some underlining worries I’m sure some long time internet readers have had because of past stories.
yassertlm:I like the typos man so chill, it means you are writing with passion. As for the review i am so happy that you can have so much fun with my novel. As for the suggestions regarding the grammar and spelling and such, those are taken under consideration and i am looking for the trustees right now, as for the manga or web comics i feel like its not time for so many media outlests, as for patreon or Amazon, i am currently working on both but maybe it will be up by the new year, for legal purposes only, as for making this novel legally protected, i am in contact with webnovel to see what i can do about it.
Thanks for your worries and consideration, although like i have established before, this is something i did for stress relief for myself first and foremost, and i would like to keep doing it, therefore keeping the right to work on my novel is something that can not be neglected, as for the manga/webcomics i am having a hard time pitching the bank face idea, since there is already a web comic doing it and there might be legal problems about it, that is why i will öeave such a thing for the futue, as for patreon and Amazon i had never even thought about it until some reader wanted to give me their money, so after consulting with the proper channels i decided to start the service in December or new year, hopefully the novel will still be fun by then
Huskeylord:Glad to hear that your working on the legal stuff especially with how good your story is. I have had some good stories/translations lost because of cruddy legal problems and such so I’m glad your taking care of it. It’s also good to know that the comic/manga idea is not out the window. Hope my review can bring more readers and your reply can ease some underlining worries I’m sure some long time internet readers have had because of past stories.