Review Detail of DaddyGlg in Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army

The story has a weird flow where sometimes there would be 20 lines of dialogue then none for a whole chapter doesn’t make proper sentences not all that much character design almost no real world background. Disclaimer I only read 10 chapters could get much better, Also author even if it is a a fun and lighthearted story it doesn’t mean it should lake the things mentioned above