Review Detail of drengoa in Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army
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So 1st off, I will update release stability soon as I get a feel for it as I've only been reading for a day now. Then 2nd this will not be everyone's go too, in terms of writing style or methodology of delivery, however as you read you can see the growth of the author from a more simplistic point to point, to a more enveloped writing style. It is a great read and a fantastic story with just enough humor and "debauchery" added to keep it interesting even if it may seem slow tanked at times. For future chapters I do so hope for a way to further differentiate the sheer growth potential of the 3 student from the remainder of the school, maybe even develop more of the school itself as besides a few instances there is little or nothing to do with the school itself. And long term (yes I hope long term) potentially delve into the dungeon and their ability to grow and adapt there(I do feel like your setting the 3 up as a team further down the line).
Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army
yassertlm
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I can not reveal the full plan but i can promise you there will be some in school tournaments and exams, there will also be open tournaments and there will most definitely be a deferentiation between the the growth of the three children, as for the dungeon you have to wait for volume two, as for my writing style i know i suck, but by the end of this week most grammar and punctuation errors will be eliminated. Thanks for the review and glad you enjoy
yassertlm:I can not reveal the full plan but i can promise you there will be some in school tournaments and exams, there will also be open tournaments and there will most definitely be a deferentiation between the the growth of the three children, as for the dungeon you have to wait for volume two, as for my writing style i know i suck, but by the end of this week most grammar and punctuation errors will be eliminated. Thanks for the review and glad you enjoy
drengoa:I would not say sucks. It's a learning curve and you've got at least a fan here do keep it up
yassertlm:I can not reveal the full plan but i can promise you there will be some in school tournaments and exams, there will also be open tournaments and there will most definitely be a deferentiation between the the growth of the three children, as for the dungeon you have to wait for volume two, as for my writing style i know i suck, but by the end of this week most grammar and punctuation errors will be eliminated. Thanks for the review and glad you enjoy
Its a similar world to our own that has been changed thanks to the discovery of mana, the current time line is around 100-500 thousand years after
The_Rad_One:I have a question. Is this in modern world?
yassertlm:Its a similar world to our own that has been changed thanks to the discovery of mana, the current time line is around 100-500 thousand years after