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Review Detail of LanceG in Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army

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LanceG
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The story is slow with %70 percent fillers of useless words, doesn't really strike my interest and he haven't even got to a dungeon once and i'm already at 20+ chapters, the character is all bland and boring although i have read slower stories than this at least it wasn't filled with fillers but character interaction or interesting power up's.

Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army

yassertlm

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yassertlm
yassertlmAuthoryassertlm

This is a growth type story so it will take about 40more chapters before entering the dungeon, as for the characters and filler words that is my own short coming that i have been conquering little by little. I hope you can start to enjoy the point of the novel itself better than my flawed writing style

Rawr_Kitten
Rawr_KittenLv5Rawr_Kitten

Thank gou for a actual review of the story and not another 5 star rateing from people who dont even read the story but rate it

yassertlm
yassertlmAuthoryassertlm

How do you find my novel? Please review it of you can

Rawr_Kitten:Thank gou for a actual review of the story and not another 5 star rateing from people who dont even read the story but rate it
LGND
LGNDLv10LGND

All my votes are for u Keep the good work

yassertlm:How do you find my novel? Please review it of you can
LGND
LGNDLv10LGND

The novel is moving at a good base I hate it when the mc jump from trash to God in 3 chapters Or less for some novels Here u grow with the mc and watch him change and become better and stronger U will see the struggle and the pain Although there is luck the mc is workaholic af

Rawr_Kitten:Thank gou for a actual review of the story and not another 5 star rateing from people who dont even read the story but rate it
yassertlm
yassertlmAuthoryassertlm

Thanks

LGND:All my votes are for u Keep the good work
Russell
RussellLv4Russell

Not 3 chapter, but was hoping for him to be god in 20 chapters but still nothing. 😂

LGND:The novel is moving at a good base I hate it when the mc jump from trash to God in 3 chapters Or less for some novels Here u grow with the mc and watch him change and become better and stronger U will see the struggle and the pain Although there is luck the mc is workaholic af