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mercurystarship
mercurystarshipLv29mth
2024-02-05 03:07

Okay, I gave it an honest shot, wasn't expecting too much. The writing seems a bit immature, just not my thing. P.S.: Author, my review isn't meant to troll you, just sharing my honest opinion. Feel free to remove it if you'd like.

Spider-Man 0X

Xcalibur_Xc
4.7
207 Chs

Liked by 44 people

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Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcAuthor

Everyone got their own tastes, I can respect that. Thanks. Atleast you didn't try to troll like most who leaves a ff and drops review just for fun.

9mth
22
mercurystarship
mercurystarshipLv2

Dude, I've read almost 20 chapters, and I gotta say, you've got some writing chops. When I say it's not mature, it's not about the quality of your writing but more about how the story feels a bit unfocused even after all those chapters. It needs some setup to really grab attention. If you work on that, I bet it could skyrocket in quality. Best of luck with your writing journey ahead!

Xcalibur_Xc:Everyone got their own tastes, I can respect that. Thanks. Atleast you didn't try to troll like most who leaves a ff and drops review just for fun.
9mth
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

nd Yuri ntr 🤮

8mth
12
tychin787
tychin787Lv13

it has Yuri n ntr??

Haku_Ouroboros:nd Yuri ntr 🤮
6mth
4
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

yses

tychin787:it has Yuri n ntr??
6mth
5
Haruto17
Haruto17Lv4

where's the ntr part??

Haku_Ouroboros:yses
6mth
2
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

deje de leer cuando el autor confirmó que habría Yuri en el harem

Haruto17:where's the ntr part??
6mth
5
The_Zombies
The_ZombiesLv1

no ntr, there isn't even a yuri scene. Author said, he might add yuri during threesome scenes.

tychin787:it has Yuri n ntr??
4mth
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1

Stop spreading false information.

Haku_Ouroboros:yses
2mth
1
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1

No. If threesome or foursome with girls and MC is considered ntr in your view, then you better avoid it.😂😂

tychin787:it has Yuri n ntr??
2mth
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1

There isn't any ntr as far as I've read. If you think a threesome scene with two girls and MC is considered ntr, then I don't know what to say.

Haruto17:where's the ntr part??
2mth
IamLegend_X
IamLegend_XLv1

Yuri isn't ntr. And Author mentioned some girl action during 3some segs with MC. It's not like they are doing it behind him. You bunch of insecure kids. I feel sorry for you.

Haku_Ouroboros:deje de leer cuando el autor confirmó que habría Yuri en el harem
2mth
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

Tipical çuck

IamLegend_X:Yuri isn't ntr. And Author mentioned some girl action during 3some segs with MC. It's not like they are doing it behind him. You bunch of insecure kids. I feel sorry for you.
2mth
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Author here with usual shameless 5 stars. As always, you got questions, let me know. Keep the reviews and comments only to the ff and try not to troll. I know some of those trolls will pay a visit as always even after losing arguments with me, so I will ignore them because it's boring. Anyway, troll reviews and comments will be deleted. Have a happy read.

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I'm writing through the translator because I don't know English, the first 8/9 chapters were good, the development with Michele, the dialogues, everything was incredible, but out of nowhere it went downhill with his aunt starting to like him out of nowhere, fantasizing about him and etc. I was very disappointed but I still continued, then the flash tries to kill him, but I continued, and soon after a beggar saves him and we discover that the beggar has a history with oscorp and so on. In conclusion, it started well and became just another fiction without logical development (the first 8 chapters were on the way, a shame they were lost)

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