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MrSheta
MrShetaLv102yr
2022-08-29 03:10

I just hope it's different from the hundreds of ffs that China has... At first I didn't notice that it was a Chinese ff, and I started reading it eagerly, only until for some reason he gets hooked on Cho and talks about British aesthetics for the role of her there are my average chinese author alarms going off, and then she comes out with the chinese food and there was when i noticed they don't interact with anyone other than a chinese pj (like cho), now i'll give her some chapters to get out of the typical Chinese development... For now only a 5/10 only for the expected Chinese author.

Harry Potter: Card Drawing System

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3.8
528 Chs

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Reaperwolf_27
Reaperwolf_27Lv4

this is Chinese author, in mtl they posted this novel a week ago sooooo bad luck to you

2yr
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MrSheta
MrShetaLv10

Just tell me is it equal to the average Chinese ff? Or at least, is it possible to read it without wanting to vomit and lose neurons?

Reaperwolf_27:this is Chinese author, in mtl they posted this novel a week ago sooooo bad luck to you
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Rochirush
RochirushLv10

Hogwarts: The Way of the Dharma

2yr
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_The_Shady_
_The_Shady_Lv4

after seeing these comments

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Nite_nite
Nite_niteLv5

nice 🙂

2yr
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Nite_nite
Nite_niteLv5

noway

2yr
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Reaperwolf_27
Reaperwolf_27Lv4

sorry didn't reli read it all harry Potter fanfics in mtl are kinda trash

MrSheta:Just tell me is it equal to the average Chinese ff? Or at least, is it possible to read it without wanting to vomit and lose neurons?
2yr
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Reaperwolf_27
Reaperwolf_27Lv4

well checked the ratings and it haves a 3.6/5 and the comments are saying that is kinda good I will try and reading it.(oh and a tip a lot of names,and probably spells and other things will be named differently because that happens in like 90% of all Chinese fanfics that is why i don't like to read Chinese fanfics )

MrSheta:Just tell me is it equal to the average Chinese ff? Or at least, is it possible to read it without wanting to vomit and lose neurons?
2yr
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Vivan_Maurya
Vivan_MauryaLv4

it took you that long to realise its MTL? you need some practice kid

2yr
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ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

was interested 😩

2yr
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SrCuervo
SrCuervoLv4

Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.

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SrCuervo
SrCuervoLv4

Hello dear reader, I am a writer in process. In this comment, he invited you to read my novel: "Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet." You can find the novel in my profile, it is not necessary to know much about Narnia to be interested in the novel. I would be very excited to grow and reach more people with this little-read novel.

1yr
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HiddenSwordsman
HiddenSwordsmanLv13

oooh ooh lemme guess... they live on the "Blue Star". And he disdains anything "Western". Refuses to each anything other than "Eastern" cuisine. and date "oriental wamen"? Annoying af.

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InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

Although this Fanfic have a bad rating, i still like it. I'm not a Chinese huh and this is not a bias decision. I just used to read Chinese fanfics before, and Chinese ff is the first ff that i read, so maybe because of that I'm quite tolerable with this. Enough of that, this ff have a Harem, and Hermione as one of the heroines, so plus points for me. I don't know about others huh, but i love Hermione and I'm not gonna change it. Each of us have their own likes and preferences, so no bashing please.

2yr

HeavenlyMarks
HeavenlyMarksLv14

Once I actually read it thinking it's gonna be good ff but then I see like china and cho being mentioned a lot then I realize that it is a mtl so sorry bro just average for me

2yr
Cautious_00_
Cautious_00_Lv4

I literally felt like throwing up from the writing it also misses a lot of parts of what makes Harry potter Harry Potter and from what I heard the mc only talks to Chinese charecters and barely uses his system later and then there are the titles the white devil dumbldore just ruins the experince of reading a Harry Potter ff. 10/10 do not recommend

2yr
Zenflare
ZenflareLv14

Sudden girlfriend without any build up. I like Cho for female lead but the author just suddenly make her fall in love without build ups or any development that could lead into that. Power scaling is too much and no development seen. There are also poor translations.

2yr
Allessnya
AllessnyaLv2

Just dont read... its google translate gone wrong... And even story itself got so many plot holes in first 2 chapters that u can count yourself to sleep...

2yr
AndreiMihai
AndreiMihaiLv5

is so baaaad.... It seems the author only has general knowledge of the universe. The translation is extremely bad and the main character's decisions have no logic

2yr
sworddreamer
sworddreamerLv14

the idea is good, however the system barely appears and it has not much influence in the story. additionally, there are lot of Chinese culture influence. I understand if OC past life, even if he has live in England for eleven years, but some of the English born characters show also Chinese traits. about the story, this is more like life of slice kind of story. you should expect a lot of "dog's food" as Chinese people say and not much action or not much sense about the power of the OC. I am dropping.

2yr
Darktokio
DarktokioLv4

Me aburrio muy rapido este fanfic. El prota esta muy roto y el autor se pasa todo el tiempo tirándose flores el mismo. El sistema aparece 3 veces en total de lo que va el fanfic.

2yr
TruthExposer123
TruthExposer123Lv4

where is the original site located so i can read ahead :) please post the original source [img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]

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