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Zenflare
ZenflareLv142yr
2022-09-25 03:33

Sudden girlfriend without any build up. I like Cho for female lead but the author just suddenly make her fall in love without build ups or any development that could lead into that. Power scaling is too much and no development seen. There are also poor translations.

Harry Potter: Card Drawing System

RyoPath
3.8
528 Chs

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EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

Their was buildup, read for once in your life

2yr
SrCuervo
SrCuervoLv4

Hi, I'm SrCuervo and I'm writing an HP novel where your help would be very useful, I hope you can read it so you can tell me what you think. It's called Harry Potter: Narnia and The World Hidden in a Closet.

1yr
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

???? why would u assume that??? jesus christ get tf away from me you act like a karen and a racist

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1yr
EyeOfSilver
EyeOfSilverLv13

ok ok they werent chinese novels funny enough they were wrote by different types of foreigners keep your racism to yourself

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1yr
arren_wylie
arren_wylieLv1

il say i prob shouldnt have said the chinese part but im not being serious so dont take it to heart

EyeOfSilver:???? why would u assume that??? jesus christ get tf away from me you act like a karen and a racist
1yr
Other Reviews
MrSheta
MrShetaLv10

I just hope it's different from the hundreds of ffs that China has... At first I didn't notice that it was a Chinese ff, and I started reading it eagerly, only until for some reason he gets hooked on Cho and talks about British aesthetics for the role of her there are my average chinese author alarms going off, and then she comes out with the chinese food and there was when i noticed they don't interact with anyone other than a chinese pj (like cho), now i'll give her some chapters to get out of the typical Chinese development... For now only a 5/10 only for the expected Chinese author.

2yr

InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

Although this Fanfic have a bad rating, i still like it. I'm not a Chinese huh and this is not a bias decision. I just used to read Chinese fanfics before, and Chinese ff is the first ff that i read, so maybe because of that I'm quite tolerable with this. Enough of that, this ff have a Harem, and Hermione as one of the heroines, so plus points for me. I don't know about others huh, but i love Hermione and I'm not gonna change it. Each of us have their own likes and preferences, so no bashing please.

2yr
HeavenlyMarks
HeavenlyMarksLv14

Once I actually read it thinking it's gonna be good ff but then I see like china and cho being mentioned a lot then I realize that it is a mtl so sorry bro just average for me

2yr
Cautious_00_
Cautious_00_Lv4

I literally felt like throwing up from the writing it also misses a lot of parts of what makes Harry potter Harry Potter and from what I heard the mc only talks to Chinese charecters and barely uses his system later and then there are the titles the white devil dumbldore just ruins the experince of reading a Harry Potter ff. 10/10 do not recommend

2yr
Allessnya
AllessnyaLv2

Just dont read... its google translate gone wrong... And even story itself got so many plot holes in first 2 chapters that u can count yourself to sleep...

2yr
AndreiMihai
AndreiMihaiLv5

is so baaaad.... It seems the author only has general knowledge of the universe. The translation is extremely bad and the main character's decisions have no logic

2yr
sworddreamer
sworddreamerLv14

the idea is good, however the system barely appears and it has not much influence in the story. additionally, there are lot of Chinese culture influence. I understand if OC past life, even if he has live in England for eleven years, but some of the English born characters show also Chinese traits. about the story, this is more like life of slice kind of story. you should expect a lot of "dog's food" as Chinese people say and not much action or not much sense about the power of the OC. I am dropping.

2yr
Darktokio
DarktokioLv4

Me aburrio muy rapido este fanfic. El prota esta muy roto y el autor se pasa todo el tiempo tirándose flores el mismo. El sistema aparece 3 veces en total de lo que va el fanfic.

2yr
TruthExposer123
TruthExposer123Lv4

where is the original site located so i can read ahead :) please post the original source [img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]

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