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Darius_Chromwell
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2022-05-16 15:01

this story has a problem with pacing, it started out rushed then smoothed out for the Naruto ark but quickly fell back into being rushed afterwards.

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Iamxourtingdeath
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Lol thats not even true, if then the Naruto part was a bit rushed, but the rest is more slowpaced. After all its a chat group fic and they spent like twenty chaps in another world

Pythia
PythiaLv11

Author- "lol thats not true." Also author- proceeds to explain why it's actually true. -_- really man?

Iamxourtingdeath:Lol thats not even true, if then the Naruto part was a bit rushed, but the rest is more slowpaced. After all its a chat group fic and they spent like twenty chaps in another world
zcxx
zcxxLv4

it is trash dont justify your trashy copy paste novel.

Iamxourtingdeath:Lol thats not even true, if then the Naruto part was a bit rushed, but the rest is more slowpaced. After all its a chat group fic and they spent like twenty chaps in another world
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