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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv143yr
2022-03-31 17:58

I was enjoying this story even if it had the cliche evil Hiruzen, but I took a break and came back and suddenly it wasn't as entertaining. Especially the thing with Madara. It all felt too quick, the sudden change in character. It would've been nice to see the slow descent into what he becomes, but the more I read the more I think "well this doesn't seem right." Also the things with the jokes or how characters react seems stiff and odd. Maybe I'm in a bad mood or those jokes just weren't for me, maybe the jokes were just bad, but I just wanted to get through the Onoki part. Still a good read though.

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Iamxourtingdeath
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60 Chs

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KasiCair
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But that's mostly my disappointment speaking. The story had a lot of potential and that's why I am disappointed. There is nothing wrong with making cheap quick entertainment fanfic and dropping it without finishing as most of them are just that. I just... this author can do so much better, ya know? ... It's frustrating.

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KasiCair
KasiCairLv1

I had read a bit further now and the 'other-world' parts are good and entertaining, if a bit too stretched out. Honestly, it was nice read if I don't take the part with Madara into account.

KasiCair:But that's mostly my disappointment speaking. The story had a lot of potential and that's why I am disappointed. There is nothing wrong with making cheap quick entertainment fanfic and dropping it without finishing as most of them are just that. I just... this author can do so much better, ya know? ... It's frustrating.
3yr
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xlvlx
xlvlxLv4

I was really hooked just reading the first 2 chps. This fanfic has potential but the downside to this is the fanfic will probably be short so i hope you can make it as long as possible or have mc world travel. I hope the love interest is Kaguya too. Keep up the good work and pls update more!🥰❤️

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zcxx
zcxxLv4

Dont waste your time on this trash, dont be fooled by other review that say its good, can you imagine naruto characters speaking like a chinese wuxia/xianxia character, cringed right and someone even says thats the author captured the canon char. personality really well 😂😂, what a joke all i see is a copy paste chinese novel by a 13 year old that has low brain cell readers 🤣. madara and tobirama is so out of characters that i almost puke 🤮 while reading it.

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Darius_Chromwell
Darius_ChromwellLv5

Reveal spoiler

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Drknzz_333
Drknzz_333Lv4

I just wanna know if you will update again or not because tbh its been what 6 - 7 months from the last update, So if it is dropped do inform us

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Yvcme
YvcmeLv12

Legends say the goated author died of ligma and ascended past the mortal realm in search to be the perfect villain. F F F F Ff F F F F F Ff F F

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True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4

Overall the story is great, I can say that this is one of the best if not the best Naruto fanfictions. And because of the premise it might be one of the best world hoping stories... I personally love this chat group for villains. And I am hoping that more similar concepts are created.. -Great Job Author (P.S.- Dont drop)

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Vacio_Starrk
Vacio_StarrkLv14

It is a shame that I can't rate this novel more than 5 stars this is a masterpiece sent from the immortal realm no even higher. I thank you so much Author looking forward to more Protagonist bullying.

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