Darius_Chromwell

I like the system and the templates but it feels like the author has never actually watched Naruto and is only familiar with the characters through other fanfics. Anyone who has watched the anime will probably feel weird reading the interactions between the characters in this most of them are so out of character that it’s kinda funny.

The novel is fine honestly, my only real complaint is how most chapters consist of different characters essentially saying the same thing over and over again. Like for example during a chapter you’ll probably see at least 7 different characters giving the same exact speech about conquerors haki one after another. It’s just filler content.

I honestly can’t tell if it’s ai or just written weirdly, there’s no emotion at all it’s like reading a grocery list. That’s not the only reason I’m rating this so low, I hate when authors write multiple reviews for their own books. It’s not just the two reviews either you can tell the author used multiple accounts to make fake reviews, one of the reviews is word for word the same as the authors written minutes apart and on a fresh level 1 account. If you’re gonna do it at least don’t make it so obvious.

It is very rare that I say this these days but there is truly only one word for me to describe this Fanfic.. MASTERPIECE

It’s an interesting story, and I really want to enjoy it but I’m not really into Honkai so I get extremely confused when I read from those characters dialogue, other than that it’s great.

Well I made it to chapter 19… it got better for a bit after chapter 5 but ultimately I don’t think there’s much hope in continuing at least for me. It’s mainly because of random things that the characters say or do that is just so out of character for them, that and the general stupidity that is the main character.

I love the concept of healer systems but the execution in the first few chapters makes me want to immediately drop it, if I can stand to read through the first 20 or so chapters I might consider changing the review but given the garbage I read in just the first 4 I don’t have high hopes.

Okay first and foremost I will say that I loved this story, for the first 30ish chapters after that well… I have a few major issues with how it progressed after the initial chapters, first and foremost the main character was a major introvert from chapter one but it gets worse and worse every chapter after around chapter 30. Also the author keeps introducing newer and newer enemie types to the main hub world that has completely lost me as far as what is happening. And lastly but most importantly the reason I’ll be dropping this is because the author had just announced that they would be nerfing the main character and resetting his entire power build. If you’re gonna do that then just start over with a new story don’t do it in the middle of a already established narrative.

Is this a translation or a rewrite? I swear I’ve read this before on this app.

It started out so good, there aren’t really enough Star Wars fanfics on here especially system ones. I like the system it’s simple but effective and I really enjoyed the MC for the first few chapters. But forcing the MC to act like the original anakin when interacting with the other characters is completely ruining it for me. In less than 3 chapters I have completely lost interest in this fanfic just because of that.