Darius_Chromwell

I haven’t liked any Naruto fanfics in a long while now, but this one i actually enjoyed, the mc is strong but not overwhelmingly so and the characters actually have personality which I find a lot of fanfics struggle to do without making everyone feel like robots.

Okay let me first say that this fanfic starts out fine, for the first 20 to 30 chapters it stays pretty consistent but after that you can start to see the author forgetting things that they said in the earlier chapters, abilities change to become far more convenient or powerful than what was first written. My primary example of that being Yamato’s wood release, it was stated in the earlier chapters that unlike the first hokage the wood release of Yamato produces dead wood lacking in vitality. But in later chapters you can see the Mc using that same wood release to create a vast and vibrant jungle directly from an arid desert…

I have several complaints about this fanfic but I’ll try to keep it fairly simple. 1. This one is honestly a bit of a gripe but it kept bothering me as I read, it’s the fact that the chapters feel way too short, and I don’t even think they were actually that short but at the end of every chapter there was a list of other books translated by this translator and the list was like 3 times longer than the actual chapters. I get that you want people to check out your other work but make an auxiliary chapter for them and just reference the one chapter at the end instead of making people read through them every single chapter. 2. I’ll be honest with you after the first one I was already ready to drop this but this just sealed the deal for me, i read the title and thought “ohh cool, a apothecary fanfic this will be great” and then come to find that the MC’s personality is completely unlikable and he doesn’t even like his own class and wants to change it. I’ll assume he eventually sticks with it but that’s enough for me to say goodbye for now.

I’m fairly certain that someone else has already translated this fanfic on here, but I can see from the synopsis that the translation quality is pretty good so I’m not really gonna hate on someone else posting this again. And to be honest I didn’t really read much into the other translation so I can’t say for sure how the quality compares. I’m not really much of a honkai fan to begin with.

We don’t see enough world of Warcraft fanfics on here and the dnd system fits this so perfectly.

Decent idea poor execution, I always enjoy a good shopkeeper story but this is definitely what’s commonly known as a crack fiction, I can’t tell if it’s meant to be like this or if it’s an ai generated story but I’m leaning more toward the former rather than the latter.

Very hodgepodge of every horror movie universe, first few chapters were confusing because the author kept pulling new things out of left field and hoping it meshed, but after that it started to feel pretty decent.

Also I find it funny that the MC’s name was even mistranslated in the description of the novel, I went into this expecting it to be Mizuki and was completely thrown off when it was something completely different.

Pretty decent, but there are a few issues. First of all the translation of the names especially when it comes to the MC gets messed up so often. And secondly the system makes no sense, it was said to be a Gilgamesh template system in chapter one but somehow the MC was able to purchase an item from league of legends??

Very Alternate Universe, but not in a bad way at least not as of yet. My only advice to anyone reading this is to not go into it expecting a canon story line, it goes off the rails immediately after the first movie is released.