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WillowsEcho
WillowsEchoLv132yr
2021-11-19 08:51

It’s bad, most of it is a schizophrenic persons inner monologue, and the few interactions are even worse. There is no consistent story, background or just anything. Then he went to skyrim and managed to make that bad. Just save yourself a headache and don’t read it.

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Kutu
KutuLv4

schizophrenic ?

ReMormius
ReMormiusLv3

Мать твоя шизофреник

A_Stupid_Story
A_Stupid_StoryLv2

Comrade??

ReMormius:Мать твоя шизофреник
ReMormius
ReMormiusLv3

товарищ!

A_Stupid_Story:Comrade??
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topak
topakLv14

Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game

IwishtoDie22
IwishtoDie22Lv2

The story is bad, but you take what you said about Skyrim back before I pull your teeth out of your mouth individually, so that you may never utter such foul words ever again.

topak:Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game
rafael_avesani
rafael_avesaniLv12

topak:Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game
PatiencePatience
PatiencePatienceLv1

topak:Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game
MirukuTaku
MirukuTakuLv4

rafael_avesani:
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Firepri
FirepriLv13

Did you just say skyrim isnt a good game

topak:Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game
sacha_mg
sacha_mgLv4

Así aparte del módulo winterno en estos primeros 30 capítulos que fueron un desastre va mejorando eh con el tiempo y se va haciendo más claro y entretenido y sí ese morado interno sí que cansa pero hay muchas situaciones interesantes sobre ese monólogo

FinnsRevenge
FinnsRevengeLv4

MirukuTaku:
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Jagh5
Jagh5Lv2

Then stop reading most existing books and fictions

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv14

You F*****.

topak:Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game
One_Common_Reader
One_Common_ReaderLv2

Si no te gusta, no lo leas. Hay gente a la que si le gusta y preferiblemente, quisiera no encontrarme con comentarios como este, gracias

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

Ahora no puedes opinar ? xD

One_Common_Reader:Si no te gusta, no lo leas. Hay gente a la que si le gusta y preferiblemente, quisiera no encontrarme con comentarios como este, gracias
One_Common_Reader
One_Common_ReaderLv2

Se puede, simplemente no quiero ver otra historia que me gusta ser cancelada debido a las críticas destructivas, no sabes la cantidad de historias con potencial qué han terminado inconclusas por ello

Haku_Ouroboros:Ahora no puedes opinar ? xD
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4

No es como su fuera mentira lo que decia

One_Common_Reader:Se puede, simplemente no quiero ver otra historia que me gusta ser cancelada debido a las críticas destructivas, no sabes la cantidad de historias con potencial qué han terminado inconclusas por ello
Rashamon
RashamonLv1

topak:Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game
Theschredder000
Theschredder000Lv14

topak:Skyrim arc is boring,its not even a good game
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