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Hammond2123
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2021-10-20 14:43

Story is good, makes you want to know what comes next or why did that happen. but the writing is like poetry, its descriptive which good but it’s a little much when almost every sentence is like that though. so good story but chill on the poetry. last thing mc is all over the place.

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Thanks for reading and trying to be helpful!

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I think between Lets bring life to the wastes and ur story r my top fave fallout fanfic here! I'm super happy other people r staring to enjoy it as well FourPi s!

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