Within the first chapter, I already liked the story much better than the original. Giving the AI an actual personality and name makes the interactions between them interesting and fun, especially when they scheme together, and gives us, the readers an emotional attachment to her. The revamped AI vs the original is like comparing an EV to a toaster, just that much better. I really like the new Leylins personality, he is arrogant, but doesn't suffer the curse of typical CN characters and spouting about 'courting death'. He knows he is weak and is making plans to get stronger. If you have read the original, you will inevitably know what happens, but I think this is much better overall. Can't wait for more chapters

I like it, dont drop this. ...................................................................................................................

keep it up author I had read the original vut didnt finish it, Thanks for your efforts.........................................................................................................................................................................................................

Keep up the good work. I like this leylin much better [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Author are you going to dig deep in the power of the laws cause in the original we didn't get to see the full extent of the powers of sin so are going to make changes so that we get to see leylin and the magus alliance use their laws to their full potential?

I haven't started reading it yet but it doesn't stop me from rating it 5 stars. the synopsis is the answer to my prayer. no romance with a.i./system and will not have its own physical body. i feel like kira when he cummed to mona lisa's hand

AUTHOOOOOOR WAKEEEE UPPP!!! ITS BEEN 19DAYSSSSSSSS WHERE R YAAAAAAA!?[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

this is better then the other Warlock of the Magus World fanfiction i have seen the mc is much more evil unlike the original mc the only problem is that auther of the novel is not updateing the chapter regularly and all in all the story is good keep it up auther and don't drooped it plz[img=faceslap]

Solid 5 stars story.It's a gem hiding in dirt.Read it and see if it suits your style, you'l probably like it though if you are bored of the super op mc's in different fanfics. First five or six chapters shouldn't take more than five minutes to read so you can give it a try.Also again the Author's mind is the best.Love ya Author<3<3<3

Love this leylin better than the original. Keep it up author. You are awesome [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]