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Hit1903
Hit1903Lv43yr
2020-12-02 21:20

There are so many problems in this story that I don't know from where to begin. This can't be called a story. Its just a wish fulfilment. First, he is angry with dumbledore about not getting his kidnappers death due to his meddling. He even become his friend. And that 5th year being a head boy... it was just ridiculous. Him apolozing to everybody, even ron when he didn't do anything wrong as they were the ones who started it. You gave mercy to luscious just to save canon. You knew dumbledore let harry be abused and your reaction was okay. I will just heal the damage. And most of all, he acted all smiles in front of harry and told him to "tough" it out when marge came instead of helping him. These are just I remember. There are at least triple of what I don't remember.

Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector

Alexander_the_grey
4.5
206 Chs

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THE_Bird
THE_BirdLv1

yeah, I like the book but the head boy thing was always a little ridiculous.

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Reveal spoiler

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Uncle_Sheogorath
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Harry Potter the rise of the Beta boy! Do you want a subservient puppy?!! :) Well, here I am!! I will be your personal house-elf, clean your bed, tell you all my secrets and be overall a subservient little BOY!! A cuck boy!!

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asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

hmmmm i remember this one is at 3.9 the last time and my review also got deleted, or the creator make a new account and repost all the chapter and seeing it was posted 3 days ago i might be right. p.s the mc is a beta character

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5head
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a well thought out and we'll executed fanfic. the story is about 30 - 45% canon and the rest is original. a good MC that, although helps others, is still not naiv and can deal with threats. excellent grammar as well as spelling. side characters are OC and has personal development as well as play a good role of the book, but not so much it outshines the MC. Ps. nice romance as well, not rushed but not prolonged, and got built up well.

4yr
Fantasy_Dream
Fantasy_DreamLv3

Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section Hmmm I still remember a few bad review in this section

4yr
Roktah
RoktahLv15

i dont know whats going on this is definately a copy of the muggleborn conspiracy. the author doesn't even hide it. Author of this Novel:Alexander_the_grey and MC of Muggleborn Conspiracy:Alexander Grey. Thats not to say there are no differences between the novels its just not enough to count as a seperate one. This feels more like a rewrite with slight alterations.

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D1cky_101
D1cky_101Lv14

An copycat of muggleborn conspiracy but with flat storyline,no significant conflict,Op wannabe mc where he just got power from the so called dark ritual,and where everyone is fucking good guy

4yr
Mlnt
MlntLv4

Finally there is a Harry Potter self-insert fanfiction with a good dumbledore and MC that explores magic. Author, what is the update schedule for this??

4yr
ToujiSouya
ToujiSouyaLv14

A properly done Harry Potter Fanfic. It’s an amazing read and I highly suggest reading it if interested in the slightest bit. Nothing to complain about at all, except that he doesn’t give Sol enough time within the book or showcase him enough even in private which I would enjoy. Overall it’s amazing.

4yr
Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6

I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available. I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available. I want to give power stones to this story. But it is not available.

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