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Amir_Blumenfeld
Amir_BlumenfeldLv42yr
2022-03-03 18:20

was a great novel until, 160 chapters in, the author suddenly decided to make it into a crossover by sending the mc to the hunterxhunter universe, and putting in the authors note that the mc would stay there for 30-40 chapters... since i've never seen hunterxhunter i obviously dropped the story, but even if i had seen it i'd still give 1 start since it's pretty f*cked up to just suddenly make it a crossover without giving any warning to the readers, or even putting a crossover tag on the novel.

Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

FanficMortal
4.6
277 Chs

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Sensei_8446
Sensei_8446Lv14

Sounds like a "you problem" xdxdxd

1yr
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Canmonarch
CanmonarchLv3

nonsense review!

10mth
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FanficMortal
FanficMortalAuthor

Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a One Piece fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 70th chapter. ~There's a possibility of MC crossing to the Naruto realm. It's just my thought, I haven't planned it yet. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!

3yr

King_H
King_HLv13

It a good story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

3yr
SwordGod007
SwordGod007Lv5

nice story... i like that you try to follow the rules of the world... there are tons of people who just gave their mc shitty power that don't go well with the rules of the world.... i hope you don't drop it soon... i always wanted a good one-piece ff with marine mc....

3yr
bitchlasagna
bitchlasagnaLv3

bad writing and execution MC- my goal is for marine and world gov separation and destruction of w.g......few chapters later MC-heaven defying strength, how dare celestial dragon talk back to me, i will kill everyone, sakazuki? lets blatantly provoke him now that i have no haki and no actual power

3yr
Hog980
Hog980Lv13

So the premise of the story is pretty good. You know why the MC is unique and what his goals are right from the beginning. My problem with it is how xianxia it is. I mean seriously killing intent pressuring him? It’s one piece, only conquerors haki should be able to do that. Also, using poison is dishonorable according to the family murdering slaver pirate? Seriously? If you are okay with the cultivation work type writing then you will love the story. If not, well then you are like me.

3yr
AS9
AS9Lv14

Pretty mediocre...... Feels like cultivation novel.... Beaten tropes like merit points are prevalent in the story and the way his devil fruit works makes no sense... Mc is pretty unlikable as well as stupid... He, for some reason won't learn coo even though the method to train it was clearly shown in the Canon... Most of his enemies are plain stupid and Akainu is almost a caricature of himself... Author forced the plot when he wanted the mc to be enemies with Akainu... The higher-ups just allowed Akainu to sabotage the mc for some reason even though they knew how much potential he had not caring for the fact that he may develop some resentment towards the system as a result... So yeah... It's pretty mediocre but it's better than 90% of the other trash on this site....

3yr
Brett_Knox
Brett_KnoxLv3

uses bounty as a measurement of power which isn't how OP works, also their devil fruit doesn't work like a devil fruit works. its more of a plot device to not make them op right away while giving them the strongest fruit they can think of. otherwise its good but those points ruined it for me.

3yr
GeneralAldrnari
GeneralAldrnariLv5

If you want a OnePiece fic with an MC that has an attitude like your typical cultivation mc with those tropes "i WoNt kNeEL tO tHe hEaVenS(Celestial dragons)" and those indifferent2x and a battle maniac. Trust me if you want a character MC that uses their head and plan, then this aint for you.

3yr
sunnybala
sunnybalaLv4

MC is very naive world government is 800 yrs old and their main fighting force is marines it won't be very easy as MC believes to stage a coup by using absolute strength he will have to be essentially more powerful than im himself for that then there is whole logistics and funding prblm MC isn't really the best in those to manage those In a coup and from what I can say he isn't really charismatic either. Best practical way would be to become a spy for revolutionary army or betray marines at the right time dealing maximum damage then becoming a pirate possibly a emperor so that he can slowly chip away WG forces. And I don't think they will let fisher tiger live he has raided marei goies after all. But then again this is a fanfic so u have the author's licence i guess. But still this story has good potential perhaps make it a little more practical then it will be legendary

3yr
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