White Roses and Red Blood

I'm amazed.the story has a a lot of potential i love the pilot and the characters and writing quality is good . I really like it . am waiting for next chapter 💜💕

The story has a lot of potential, and I found the characters to be well-developed and distinct. Each character has their own unique voice, which is great. The dialogue is engaging, and the overall plot is captivating. However, there are a few areas in the writing that could benefit from some updates. While the story is great, I noticed some minor issues with the writing style that could be addressed to improve the flow of the narrative. Despite this, I think the story has a lot of potential, and with some adjustments to the writing, it could be even better. Keep up the good work

The premise of the novel has potential, and with careful attention to character development, world-building, pacing, and editing, it could be a great read. Keep writing and exploring the story's possibilities! Good Luck.

I love reading romance contemporary novels and this is the one which I am enjoying. I love such stories which start without any love and end loving each other dearly. your story is really interesting and enjoyable. keep writing and updating it. really loving it.

Good synopsis! It definitely hooks the readers to check your novel out. As for the pacing, for me, it was a bit too fast? But I guess it makes sense since I'm a slow-burn type of reader. Overall, It's good! The plot is interesting, and your writing skills is great. Keep up the good work!

"And just like that, Elesha's dream of being a painter is crushed," was my thought as I read the chapters (⁠ ⁠･ั⁠﹏⁠･ั⁠). I like that she chooses to do it for her 'country' and 'family' but I also wish that she would think about her happiness and out herself first. Overall, the chapters are interesting but could use more grammar editing to make the sentences flow smoothly. The characters also need to come to life so instead of describing them, I think showing who they are by their actions will bring them to life and make us, the readers, develop a bond with them. I'm adding this to my library![img=recommend]

The writing in this novel is really good, but I think there's one problem that needs to be addressed. The author often "tells" the reader about the characters instead of "showing" us through their actions and events. It would be better for the story if the characters' personalities and traits were revealed through their actions and behavior, rather than just describing them all at once.

While this story is quite enjoyable, I feel there is some work needed before it can be considered a masterpiece. In terms of plot and characters, the story is perfect, the author able to show the characters personalities well as well as write engaging dialogue. The plot is also quite interesting and I say this as a fan of historical romance stories. My problem with the story comes in the form of grammar (I might be nitpicking here). There are a few sentences that seem to go on and on, without really having an exact subject. Not sure if that makes sense? There is also a lot of telling in this story which I feel messes up the writing style a little. I feel a lot of descriptions and information could be 'shown' instead, making for easy reading. Anyway, you've done a great job author, one or two problems here and there, but otherwise keep it up and keep improving.

Well, well. I usually ain't one to view a book with heavy romance, but this one seems interesting. First, the good points: The world-building is top-class. Descriptive words conveyed what the setting is truly like. I like the royal atmosphere and this story allows me to experience that. Next, the not-so-good ones: I feel like many of the paragraphs are too long, and there are many punctuation errors. While the grammar is good, there are also too many repetitive pronouns. Still worth the read in my opinion. Check it out.

Wow, nice!!!! Keep up the good work[img=recommend]

The plot of the story is quite interesting and keeps the reader engaged. The idea of switching identities adds a layer of complexity to the story and makes it more intriguing. However, the summary does not provide enough details about the characters or their motivations, which could make it harder for readers to connect with them.

your story is nice and the synopsis has a nice ring to it , the book is very descriptive and easy to imagine , to crown it all I love your book.

I loved the symbolism in the title that directly correlates with the pilot chapter. The flow of events was smooth and the conversations were vivid and realistic. The plot moves at a perfect pace where it leaves you hungry to read more wonderful book

I love the way the writer started the story, the curiosity to want to read more is definitely there... so far so good, I am already loving this romance book... please do keep on updating your masterpiece dear author 😊😊

i have not read all chapter but as for as I have read this is a interesting novel

Your story was really good! Your writing style is captivating and makes it easy for the reader to understand the story. Your descriptions are vivid and the dialogue is perfect. I especially like how you portrayed the two princesses, Estella and Elesha. Your portrayal of them was great! I also appreciate the creative idea of using Princess Elesha as a substitute for her sister's marriage.

The sisters are written very well, there bond is inspiring. A great use of consistent metaphors helps weave the scenes into your mind. If commas could be used more often this story would be near flawless thus far.

The story has potential, a bit cliché but we will see as the story progresses. Well written, although I would like more explanation on things. Like the reason the MC would love her sister a lot which leads up to her make such decisions. The pace was good too, not too slow or fast. There's a some areas where it could be improved, to make the flow from each para/sentence to another more smooth. Still keep up the good work author!

Great novel! only 9 chapters released but it has enormous potential. I really like it. :)

White Roses and Red Blood - the story has great potential, and the characters are well-developed. The dialogue is engaging, and the overall plot is captivating. The best thing I like in this novel was the style that author use to describe each character or conversation and interaction in each scene, some may not like it but I really like it this way, It was easy to read and easy to paint the image of each scene.