I'm amazed.the story has a a lot of potential i love the pilot and the characters and writing quality is good . I really like it . am waiting for next chapter 💜💕

The story has a lot of potential, and I found the characters to be well-developed and distinct. Each character has their own unique voice, which is great. The dialogue is engaging, and the overall plot is captivating. However, there are a few areas in the writing that could benefit from some updates. While the story is great, I noticed some minor issues with the writing style that could be addressed to improve the flow of the narrative. Despite this, I think the story has a lot of potential, and with some adjustments to the writing, it could be even better. Keep up the good work

The premise of the novel has potential, and with careful attention to character development, world-building, pacing, and editing, it could be a great read. Keep writing and exploring the story's possibilities! Good Luck.

I love reading romance contemporary novels and this is the one which I am enjoying. I love such stories which start without any love and end loving each other dearly. your story is really interesting and enjoyable. keep writing and updating it. really loving it.

Good synopsis! It definitely hooks the readers to check your novel out. As for the pacing, for me, it was a bit too fast? But I guess it makes sense since I'm a slow-burn type of reader. Overall, It's good! The plot is interesting, and your writing skills is great. Keep up the good work!

"And just like that, Elesha's dream of being a painter is crushed," was my thought as I read the chapters (⁠ ⁠･ั⁠﹏⁠･ั⁠). I like that she chooses to do it for her 'country' and 'family' but I also wish that she would think about her happiness and out herself first. Overall, the chapters are interesting but could use more grammar editing to make the sentences flow smoothly. The characters also need to come to life so instead of describing them, I think showing who they are by their actions will bring them to life and make us, the readers, develop a bond with them. I'm adding this to my library![img=recommend]

The writing in this novel is really good, but I think there's one problem that needs to be addressed. The author often "tells" the reader about the characters instead of "showing" us through their actions and events. It would be better for the story if the characters' personalities and traits were revealed through their actions and behavior, rather than just describing them all at once.

While this story is quite enjoyable, I feel there is some work needed before it can be considered a masterpiece. In terms of plot and characters, the story is perfect, the author able to show the characters personalities well as well as write engaging dialogue. The plot is also quite interesting and I say this as a fan of historical romance stories. My problem with the story comes in the form of grammar (I might be nitpicking here). There are a few sentences that seem to go on and on, without really having an exact subject. Not sure if that makes sense? There is also a lot of telling in this story which I feel messes up the writing style a little. I feel a lot of descriptions and information could be 'shown' instead, making for easy reading. Anyway, you've done a great job author, one or two problems here and there, but otherwise keep it up and keep improving.

Well, well. I usually ain't one to view a book with heavy romance, but this one seems interesting. First, the good points: The world-building is top-class. Descriptive words conveyed what the setting is truly like. I like the royal atmosphere and this story allows me to experience that. Next, the not-so-good ones: I feel like many of the paragraphs are too long, and there are many punctuation errors. While the grammar is good, there are also too many repetitive pronouns. Still worth the read in my opinion. Check it out.

Wow, nice!!!! Keep up the good work[img=recommend]